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1 Jimen on Thu Mar 26, 2015 7:13 pm

Name: Jimen
Tier Level: 2
Species: Snake
Type: Combat Pet
Description: Jimen is a huge snake. He is about 20 meters long and 1 meter wide.
Note:

Name: Acid Cannon
Tier Level: 2
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: Jimen opens his mouth. He then launches a ball of his acid (he has acid instead of venom). The acid is green and can melt through metal, stone and wood. The ball is 1 meter diameter. It has a 6 to 40 meter range.
Strengths:
-The acid can pass through wood, Iron and stone.
-The acid can pass through by defensive T2 or lower skills.
-Painful damage.
Weaknesses:
-If the acid falls in a big water body, it will dilute.
-The acid will only burn flesh.
-Can easily hit allies.

Name: Dig
Tier Level: 1
Cooldown: Passive
Description: Jimen is able to dig at a very high speed. He can move underground at 50kph.
Strengths:
-He can dig through the ground and stone.
-It's difficult to catch him underground.
-Good surprise attacks.
Weaknesses:
-The ground moves while he is underground which can cause people to notice his presence.
-He won't be able to attack anyone while he is underground.
-He is slower if he is outside of the ground. He'll only be able to move at 15kph.



Last edited by Noah S. Trajada on Sat Mar 28, 2015 9:58 am; edited 1 time in total

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2 Re: Jimen on Fri Mar 27, 2015 1:07 pm


Given that this is a giant snake, 50kph (30mph) seems feasible at t1. Instead, Jimen's t2 technique is what bothers me. 40 metres is a massive range. There must be some fairly unique circumstances that would make such a range a weakness. Just so you know though, that range is fine for a t2. It's just the fact that it's listed under "weaknesses" that bothers me. Also, a 1-metre radius ball-projectile is fairly large on top of all the other advantages it has. I'd say a 1-metre diametre is far more acceptable. Just fix those two things for the t2 technique and you should be alright.


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3 Re: Jimen on Sat Mar 28, 2015 9:58 am

Done xD Dont know why did i put the range in weaknesses

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4 Re: Jimen on Sun Mar 29, 2015 3:16 am


I'll go ahead and give you your First Approval; now you simply must wait for another staff member to give you a second approval and you'll be good to go.


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5 Re: Jimen on Fri Apr 10, 2015 6:54 pm

I still need a second approval

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6 Re: Jimen on Fri Apr 10, 2015 7:26 pm


Moved to approved.


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