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1 Snake Arm on Fri Feb 06, 2015 7:48 pm

Equipment Name: Snake Arm
Equipment Tier: 3
Devil Fruit Fed: Zoan
Equipment Type: Accessory/Arm
Equipment Description: It's a very well wooden made arm. The arm has a blade inside the palm to be able to use it a weapon as well. The arm is the same size a normal arm is. It's made of heavy wood, so it works like a hammer as well.
The zoan fed is the Hebi Hebi no Mi, Model: Black Mamba, which allows the wooden arm to turn into a snake. The snake can reach up to 10 meters. The snake is a wooden black mamba, this is because it's just a partial form. The snake has a black mouth, and even if it's made of wood, it produces a deadly poison. In the case of the snake, it can reveal the blade from its mouth.
Equipment Significance: After Hiroko's adventure in Amazon Lily, he lost his right arm, and because of that, he created this new arm which he gave some good properties.
Equipment Strength:
-Heavy and strong enough to break rock.
-He doesn't feel that arm, if he is slashed with a sword, he won't feel it.
-The hidden blade is powerful enough to cut through rock as well.
-Poison Fang: Just like any poisonous snake, any bite can be deadly. The poison causes damage and pain in the surrounding parts of the bitten part, but it can be cured by a doctor. After being bitten in the same zone twice, the pain will become much bigger, and it will be more complicated to cure, if the enemy is bitten 3 times, the zone will be paralyzed and it will be almost incurable (It's paralyzed until a doctor cures it out of battle or until the end of the thread).
-Spitting Poison: The black mamba is a snake which can be recognized because of it's technique to launch venom from it's claws instead of just biting. The poison will only cause some itch and will cause the part to change slightly to a red color. But if the poison falls in the eyes, the poison will blind the target for 1 post. The poison can reach up to 10 meters.
-Snake's Power: The snake, because it's made of a strong wood, it's able to carry a lot of weight. It an carry about 1 tone and even hit with that same strength. This can also work to grapple and strangle enemies.
Equipment Weaknesses:
-The user can never throw it or use it like a normal weapon.
-In exchange of this weapon, he lost his arm.
-The blade is only about 10 centimeters after it passes his fingers.
-If the wooden snake is attacked with a fire based attack, it will cause it to return to it's normal arm state until the next post.
-The poison is not so dangerous, it will only actually cause something good if it's a bite or it enters an eye.
-The poison, including the blindness, can be cured by a doctor.
-Devil fruit weaknesses: Water and sea stone.

Equipment Ability: Lakaṛī Sām̐pa (Wood Snake in Hindi)
Equipment Ability Range: Mid Range (6-70 meters)
Equipment Ability Cool-down: Instant. Cooldown is 3 posts
Equipment Ability Description: The snake stretches up to 70 meters as it moves under the ground and outside the ground moving up and down. The snake will go up each time it sees an enemy and pierce through him. The snake will pierce any amount of enemies and objects, and when it ends it's trajectory after reaching the 70 meters, it will return and transform into an arm again. The snake will be kept as a wooden snake.
Ability Strength:
-Can pierce many enemies and objects.
Ability Weaknesses:
-Has to go in a straight line.
-Can't pierce T3 armor or higher.



Last edited by Hiroko on Sat Feb 14, 2015 9:59 pm; edited 3 times in total

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2 Re: Snake Arm on Fri Feb 06, 2015 7:57 pm


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3 Re: Snake Arm on Sat Feb 07, 2015 3:36 pm

Good to go. Approval 2


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4 Re: Snake Arm on Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:12 pm

Edited, I fed it a zoan devil fruit
Note: It was bought by my alt Kujira

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5 Re: Snake Arm on Tue Feb 10, 2015 9:19 am

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-Make sure to claim this fruit in the fruit thread.

Poison Fang Strength:

-After the opponent is bitten 3 times in the same spot. How long does it stay paralyzed? I assume until the opponent cures the poison (or until end of thread).

-Snake Power Strength:

-I just see how other staff feels about 3 tones thing. The other part is fine to me.


Lakaṛī Sām̐pa (Wood Snake in Hindi)

-Keep tier differences in mind. Like if someone was wearing higher tier armor, the snake might not be to pierce it on its first strike.



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6 Re: Snake Arm on Tue Feb 10, 2015 10:29 am

I think I changed everything, and also changed the 3 tones for 1, is that fine?

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7 Re: Snake Arm on Thu Feb 12, 2015 4:39 am

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1/2 Approval. 2nd Staff member needed for Approval or to catch something I may have miss. Sorry for wait.


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8 Re: Snake Arm on Sat Feb 14, 2015 8:14 pm

I have 1 with this. a 20 meter long snake is way too big, that is over 60feet. I'd suggest shortening that down to at least 10.


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9 Re: Snake Arm on Sun Feb 15, 2015 8:56 am

Bump changed

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10 Re: Snake Arm on Sun Feb 22, 2015 9:08 pm

Approve 2/2


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