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1 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Thu Dec 25, 2014 12:08 pm

Chapter 0 - Pilot: Birth!

Winter struck the island of Lvneel, the Kingdom under the reign of a nonchalant King, in October, Shunji was born to mother, Katrina Wraith and father, Jacob Wraith.

Jacob: What should we call him dear?

Jacob's attire was always very dark in nature. They were known as the ghastly duo of the island, the Wraith family, head of the Church connected to the King himself. For generations, their family has worked personally with the King's inner circle, being their consultants, more of a psychologist in hindsight than a priest. The guilt of reigning as King plagued the Royal family's consciousness.

Katrina: I think... We should call him Shunji.

Jacob: He who waits... That sounds perfect for our son who will bless world with his gifts... I can see it. His aura, it's pure! A color I've never seen before! Jishi-Jishi

In the infirmary of the Church, Katrina lied cradled with her baby boy, however, instead of crying, Shunji came into this world, laughing. Curdled in his mother's arms, far before the humane reason could develop in his little skull, Shunji rested in peace. A rustle of horse carriages outside the doors of the Church could be heard from the infirmary, the Royal court stormed the Church Castle, escorting the King's Representative, Lianne to the ICU room. Lianne entered the infirmary and shuffled over to Katrina's bed, with all the bed nurses now cleared out, she pulled up a stool and grabbed Katrina's hand. Clearing the hair out of little Shunji's eyes, not like they was much to be had, for the infant, she made funny faces as he slept.

Lianne: He's cute. He looks like his papa.

Katrina: Eh!? I hope not. He's much cuter!

Jacob fell to the floor in depression. Clutching his crucifix:

Jacob: Dear God... Let my wife treat me better... I love you Honey! Jishi-Jishi.

Katrina: Die.

Katrina said smiling. After her husband tears flowed, she tilted her head tot he side smiling, sticking out her tongue.

Jacob: Dear God...

Lianne: I see the two of you are still love birds as always. However Jacob, the King summons you his chamber immediately. A problem has arisen. It's Master Tiger is acting up again...

Jacob's face got serious.

Jacob: I'll get my equipment.

Walking over to his wife, who he kissed on her forehead. Jacob shook his son's hand and kissed him on his forehead. Titling his top hat and strapping on his holy long coat, Jacob got into the horse and carriage, storming to the castle. Lianne stood behind, talking with Katrina about life and the problems in the castle until she passed out, exhausted from childbirth.

Character so Far:



Name: Katrina Wraith
Occupation: Preacher / Priest


Name: Jacob Wraith
Occupation: Head of the Zion Church / Paladin


Name: Lianne Von' Kortz
Occupation: Adviser of the King

 

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2 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Thu Dec 25, 2014 3:25 pm

Chapter 1: King's Plea!


King's Court
Lvneel Castle
Throne Room


King: I'm glad your here my old friend. He's been acting strange lately... I'm scared for my son. 

Jacob: What has he done this time?

King: He's to be married to a neighboring countries lady, however, he's been seen associating with pirates that have raided their country. I believe my guard told me that they are the same pirates your family helped ward off ages ago... Shield Pirates. 

Jacob: Curtis Shield... Even in his old ages... He's still causing us trouble. My wife and I are retired from the Court, you are more than capable-

King: Your quick witted as always Jacob. You got me, if I'm to fight off this army, I'll need the help of your family. 

Jacob: It's just me and my wife now... Haven't we lost enough love ones for this nation.

King: I'm sorry for being so selfish... but I have no choice. Our court is still young and with my son siding with Shield, when I die, this nation will fall into his hands. 

Jacob: I'll go. Leave my wife to her recovery... Besides, I'm more than enough. Where is the ship situated?

King: Off the coast of Ember City.

Jacob: The slums... sounds about right.

King: My army marches in the morning... Be ready and Jacob, if we loose here, our country is doomed. This is for your son's future as well.

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3 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Thu Dec 25, 2014 4:07 pm

Jacob returned home to his wife, in the living quarters of the giant Church. His wife lied in bed passed out and his son slept quietly in the crib. Walking into the room, he kept no noise and just watched them sleep in their deep slumber. Opening the patio of their room, he sat in his rocking chair, singing a hymn he has knew since a young boy in the church service. The sound of his whistling caressed the ears of his slumbering wife, as she sat up, calling to him.

Katrina: You looked stressed, what’s wrong, what does the foolish King want now?

Jacob’s face grew pale as he now sat petting his wife’s head.

Jacob: It’s Shield… He’s back.

Katrina’s face also corresponded with her husband’s now.

Katrina: Damn it! Shield’s been trying to take over Lvneel for the last thirty years now! The King should join the World Government- How much longer will he-

Jacob kissed Katrina on her cheek.

Jacob: It’s alright… I’ll take care of him once and for all.

Katrina: Your body can’t take another war Jacob last time you lost your eye… What more?

Jacob smiled.

Jacob: You're never this worried about me. Is this the true love I’ve been waiting so long to see?

Katrina: Idiot, I’ve always loved you.

Jacob: I know… I’m just kidding.

Katrina clutched into Jacob’s arms and that night she prayed for the safe return of her husband as she sat up rocking young Shunji who was crying.

Katrina: May the God’s be with you. Here-

Katrina placed an aura of white light over Jacob’s body.

Katrina: Remember, my aura can only negate your joint pain for 48 hours. After that, it’s all up to you.

Jacob, since the last war, had a long history of back pain from his battle with Shield. It was when he was twenty, far before he had married his wife, Katrina, when they both served as warriors in the former King’s army. Facing off a total of over one hundred separate attacks from the Shield Pirates, eight years of peace rested upon Lvneel, until today.

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4 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Sat Dec 27, 2014 12:58 pm

Chapter 2: Martyr of Ember City

Hours into Battle...


Jacob: Why must we do this... Shield?


Shield: This world is so corrupted Jacob. Being a pirate is all I know. I want a home for my men... We've grown tired of these seas.


Jacob: I can't let you invade here. My family... These people...They shouldn't suffer for the happiness of a bunch of pirates. Your soul... It screams out in pain Shield. Look around you!


Smoke filled the skies, the sound of men being slain could be heard from the shores of Ember City. The clashing steel etched painful remorse into the memories of Jacob, as the current event caused him to weep for all the lost souls. His body radiated a massive heat due to the plasma that now dripped off his frame.


Jacob: One day... My son will inherit this power. May he never discover a power so devastating as this... Goodbye my love. Super...Nova.


A humungous bang was given off. Plasma of the hottest volumes were sent out into waves across the battlefield wiping out all of Shield's ships. Killing not only Shield's first mate and crew but all the soldier's present in the Lvneel Army. From this day onwards, Jacob Wraith was known as the Martyr of Ember City and a great man, that sadly, Shunji never got to meet. However, the Devil Fruit, the Hoshi Hoshi No Mi, that brought an end to the conflict in Lvneel was soon to be a heirloom from his father, one, that would hopefully allow him to change the world.

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5 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Sat Dec 27, 2014 1:32 pm

Chapter 3: Shunji - Age Six 

Shunji and his mother Katrina, held mass for all the residents in the Kingdom to attend. They had decorated the church in an array of ordainment and colorful streams. From the rafters of the church, Shunji sat with his iris turned in this weird pattern, resembling that of converging crosses of some sort.

Shunji: Evil... Good... Evil... Good...

Shunji's mother sneaked from behind and began to nuzzle the sapphire boy's face.

Shunji: Mother... You really must stop this... It's embarrassing. I'm already six.

Katrina: I just can't help but hug you every time I see your adorable little outfit. You look just like your father.

Shunji was dressed in a miniature priest attire, with an elongated hat which bore a crucifix as it's main identifier, all white robes with a mauve patterned cross as well. Katrina almost suffocated Shunji every time she did this until he could take more and lashed out.  

Shunji: Let go mom! Die!

Katrina dropped to the ground in depression.

Katrina: Dear Lord... Why must my son treat me like this? Please-

Shunji: Mother... The King and his court has arrived.

After the incident in Ember City, the King appointed his son, Tiger as the new ruler of Senna City, hometown of the Wraith Family and church. It was only a matter of time, until Tiger takes over Lvneel, as the King has been growing old both in wit and body. Tiger created his own personal enforcer's and collected 'taxes' from all the cities within the Kingdom without the King's approval. Anyone who spoke out against him was sentence to hanging. The situation became so drastic, that the citizen's called out to the World Government for assistance, no correspondence has been seen as yet. The King and his court, along with his son, as the head of the court and specific officers in his private police force sat in the front of the Church service.

Shunji: Momma... Be careful around the mud headed one... His aura is pure red.

Katrina: That's the King's son, Tiger. I know, I can sense something wicked from him too. However, the King is an old friend of ours... You must be careful how you speak of his off spring.

Shunji: Yes Momma.

After the service... In the cafeteria of the Church

Lianne: The King is growing ill. He doesn't have much days remaining...

Katrina: Oh my... How much longer does he have?

Lianne: A year or two... At the most but if Tiger becomes King, this country is doomed.

Katrina: You have my support Lianne. My son, when he's grown, he'll have the potential to save this Kingdom.

Shunji slept peaceful in his room, exhausted from the long service and cleaning up the church.



Character's So Far:


Name: Katrina Wraith
Occupation: Preacher / Priest


Name: Lianne Von' Kortz
Occupation: Adviser of the King


Name: Tiger C. Jaxton
Occupation: Weapon Master / Brawler / Prince of Lvneel

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6 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Sun Dec 28, 2014 8:32 pm

Chapter 4 - The Hero of Lvneel

Ember City now became the home for tons of pirate grunts, more specifically, Cobra Pirates. Shunji had begun training with his mother to develop his spiritual gifts, through a series of devote prayer and meditation. After six years of training, Shunji age twelve, has now mastered the beginning principles of Spirit Weaving. Shunji stood on the outskirts of Ember City, with his rosary and prayer beads wrapped around his hand. His ears were now fully pierced all over, especially his trademark bottom lip piercing and his attitude towards fighting had duly improved. Shunji was mostly a spoil sport growing up. Skipping the neighborhood parties and get togethers to stay home and prayer. After mastering the Prayer of Beginning, Shunji was able to develop a skill known as Spirit Weaving, manipulating the spiritual energy channeled from god to him to conduct miracles of sorts. Shunji has reached the age of trial, in the Wraith household, that involves preaching the word of God and becoming a solider in his army, though, things weren't as black and white for Shunji.

Katrina: Are you sure you want to take on this mission alone?

Shunji: I can handle this mother... Stop worry yourself.


Katrina: I taught you what little martial arts I know... Rely on your prayers and your mind, that's where your triumph will come. Again... Shunji, I know your not fond of Tiger-

Shunji: I didn't join the new 'King's' court for him. Auntie Lianne begged me to be in his personal guard. I'll protect the lecher until I can exorcise whatever evil lies in his soul. His actions always rattle me, jeez!

Katrina: Calm down Shunji! My boy's grown up so-

Shunji jumped off the small cliff, that lead to the forest outside of the camp.Katrina fell to the grown crying.


Katrina: Why must my son treat me Lord?

Shunji: I'll be fine. Stop worrying mother!

Shunji rose his hands to his chin and begun to prayer.

Shunji: Dear Heavenly Father...


Shunji began to knead the spiritual energy into his body as he maneuvered through the forest. Shunji's Tribunal Eyes activated, he had gained the nickname from the soldier's in the army, the eyes of Zion, or the eyes of Heaven.

Techniques:

Tier 1 Technique Name: Prayer of Beginning
Tier 1 Technique Type: Support / Close Range
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 5
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Shunji begins praying to his deity and asking for guidance in this world and life. He begins repentance for all the sins he as committed lately and asks for his spiritual abilities to be awakened. This skill must be done for a duration of two posts, user repeats a holy hymn and finishes with ‘Amen’.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
- Unlocks the Tier 1 Skill’s for this skill set, expect Prayer of Shift.
- Weaves users spiritual energy to peak capacity.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- If the users concentration is broken, prayer takes twice amount of time to be completed. (Duration increased to four)
- If the prayer fails, user must wait an additional ‘three’ posts, eight in total on the cool down.



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7 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Mon Dec 29, 2014 8:38 am

NPC For This Arc:



Name: Cobra K. Richards
Tier 1
Bounty: 2,000,0000
Skill Set: Venomous Hook / Shotgun / Cyborg
Currently running illegal activities using Ember City as his home base.


Cobra's Band of Misfits aka the Crew

Name: Lisa Waters
Tier 1
Bounty: 1,000,000
Skill Set: Doctor / Navigator
Currently helping with illegal activities and vice captain of the crew.

Cobra Masked Grunts: x 100


After completing his prayer, a white thick aura omitted from Shunji's body as he walked into the pirates camp.

Shunji: Cobra K. Richards... You and your men are sentenced to imprisonment for murders and extorting of money from civilians.

Cobra: Before sending his best... The King spits in my face and sends me this brat. Your Lvneel's only hope, ha.

Lisa: You never know. He's omitting some pretty strange vibes, I feel at peace around his presence.

Cobra: Just don't forget whose side your on.

Cobra got up from the throne he was sitting in, cracking his neck, he began to taunt the sapphire haired priest.

Cobra: What's a man- oops, I mean child of god doing in these parts?

Shunji: Where all children of God technically, even your poor misguided self.

Cobra: Funny. A priest with an attitude. How may I help you?

Shunji: In the name of the Church and the government of Lvneel, I place you under arrest.

Cobra: Tiger sent you himself?

Shunji: I came here on my own accord. I've been watching your illegal trades in town for weeks. I don't need much evidence, my word's all. I am one of the King's Guard.

Cobra: Soon to be a dead one.

The sound disrupted Shunji's eardrums and the shock, not the actual impact made him fall on his back. Cobra's hand was modified into a dartgun, darts that explode upon contact.

Lisa: The darts contain trace elements of cobra venom. Once the paralysis and the hallucinations kick in, it won't matter what you see, you'll die within a few minutes.

Cobra: Get him boys!

Cobra's men surrounded Shunji, each with bats, bricks and some even had swords. The hundred men surrounded the little kid with much ease, still laying on his back.

Shunji: Cobra Venom... This is perfect chance to test these prayers out.

Shunji jumped towards the swordsman infront of him and pulled out his batons. Striking the batons in a shape pattern into the man's neck caused him to drop instantly.

Shunji: One down.

Shunji began to spin through the body of fighters, wiping around his batons in a violent motion taking out Cobra's grunts two or sometimes three at a time.

Cobra: Damn him.... Lisa!

Lisa: Yes boss!

Lisa walked smoothly through the pack of grunts, they all cleared a path for her entrance.

Lisa: It's a pity kid. I used to be a woman of God but God doesn't help you even when you need him the most.

Shunji: Heh... Sometimes lady, you just have to listen closely-

Shunji's body began to contort from the pain of the venom. He didn't let the pain effect him, he dashed towards packs of three more grunts and wiped them out with wild strikes of his iron based batons. Shunji dropped his baton and clasped his hands.

Shunji: Prayer of Will!

A large streams of white aura bled from Shunji's body. His tribunal eyes, mauve in nature turned white.

Shunji: I'll save you lady.

Shunji dashed towards Lisa. There were now a few centimeters of so away from each other, placing his them on her forehead and drawing a cross.

Shunji: Exorcism!

Shunji repelled the negative energy from out of Lisa.

Shunji: Amen.

Shunji disappeared.

The force of Shunji's shots, sent the bodies that made contact with baton fly into the pack of grunts, one after another, with Lisa defeated the men dropped like flies.

Cobra: Enough!

Cobra shouted now walking down to the area where his men were being decimated.

Cobra: For you to be moving with that venom in your veins, must be a miracle indeed. However, I'm not a god fearing man but I do respect your skill. What's your name kid?

Shunji: Shunji... Shunji Z. Wraith.

Cobra: My name's Cobra K. Richards, nice to meet ya. I like to take the names of those who I'm going to kill. When you get to heaven, make sure to tell God my name, maybe he'll ease you remorse of dying so young.

Cobra's feet turned into wheels and he rolled towards Shunji, catching him off guard, he stabbed Shunji with a dagger built into his hand, which was coated in poison.

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8 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Tue Dec 30, 2014 9:51 am

Shunji screamed out in pain, his body now hung on the dagger of the cybernetic warrior. Shunji fired a punch into Cobra's chest, the punch had near to no effect.

Cobra: I'm a warrior of these seas. I won't loose to some small water dog.

Cobra threw Shunji into the ground over into some nearby crates in the warehouse.

Cobra: Time to end this... Flamethrower!

Cobra's hand began to heat up, the sound of a clicking lighter echoed throughout the house, the flame shot off in a lined fashion and torched the crates in the area where Shunji fell. The flames shot up to the ceiling, the warehouse torched and Cobra ordered his men to leave.

Cobra: It's over kid. If you only knew Tiger paid us to take over this city... Your life wouldn't have been lost foolish-

Shunji: Prayer of Protection - Orb!

Shunji dashed out of the fire, charging towards Cobra with a orb encasing his body. Shunji slid to the floor, low kicking Cobra to the ground, springing upwards, Shunji regain his batons, which he slammed into Cobra's mechanical shoulders, pinning him to ground.

Shunji: Prayer of Shift!

Shunji prayed for a spiritual hand which lifted Cobra and tossed him two meters into the air. Gathering his energy from the Prayer of Will, his aura shot through the roof, as Cobra fell, he fired another shot to his chest cage, shattering his cyborg lining, all that remained was exposed circuits and his exposed now, human hands. It appeared to be mechanical parts or armor of sorts covering his human body, all but his right hand that was all mechanical. The fire filled the whole warehouse now, Cobra's men watched from the outside, as their boss went up in flames. Lisa now sat on the ground, outside, praying for both of their safe return.

Cobra: I never thought i'd end up like this.

Shunji: Heh... Jishi-Jishi me neither.

Cobra: That poison, how are you not dead yet?

Shunji: God's Grace. Spirit Weaving has special passive, poison's are negated in my body once I have holy energy within me.

Cobra: I see. Shall we end this then?

Shunji: We shall.

Cobra: Why do you fight for this country? It's like a disease. Being their hero, unless you from here, they shun you. Such a closed minded people.

Shunji: I get what your saying but if I don't save them who will.

Cobra: Maybe you should be King.

Shunji: Maybe.

Cobra: Word of advice kid... Be careful around Tiger. He's not as guilt free as he would like his people to believe.

Shunji: I've been wary of that man since the day I first lied eyes on him. His aura, it's pure evil.

Cobra and Shunji exchanged a series of punches. The final punch was thrown by the victor, Shunji. Afterwards, Shunji was awarded a medal by the King and Cobra was turned over to the World Government, as well as, Lisa Waters. The bounties for the two pirates were awarded to Shunji and he was also promoted to a Commander in the Royal Court. After Cobra's words, Shunji began an investigation on Tiger, with the help of his mother, who had now fell ill. When Shunji turned fourteen, his mother, Katrina Wraith passed away and Shunji was now the leader of a covert rebel group, planning to coup d'etat the King. His mother passed onto him, a family book of prayers, which contained all of the eventual spirit weaving techniques he would learn in the coming years. Lvneel experienced a period of peace, no real up rises or attacks and whatever ones' they did have, Shunji ended them quickly, in hopes to not have his plans ruined. Shunji turned sixteen, two years later on the eve of his mother's death, a man appeared, carrying a letter from his Mother and one from his father, the man's name was Jugard D. Shield, father to the Captain of the Shield pirates, the man his father fought to death. What Shunji learned from Jugard that day, will be forever be imprinted in his mind.

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9 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Tue Dec 30, 2014 10:21 am

Chapter 5 - Your Weak. Get Stronger.

Sitting on the steps with entrance to the Church, where Shunji now resided after officially shutting down the Church after his mother's untimely death, sat a man with a red bandana around his neck. The man was muscularly built and had a tattoo of the Word government logo on his hand, with a gigantic cross through it.


Jugard D. Shield:


Name: Jugard D. Shield (NPC)
Tier: 4
Occupation: Brawler / Weapon Master
Skillsets: Free Hand Marital Arts / Bo Staff User

Jugard: If your father could see what was happening to his beloved church he'd cry rivers.

Shunji: Who are you? This is private property.

Jugard: You've got a mouth on ya' I'll give you that. My name is Jugard D. Shield. The reason your father is dead is because of my stupid son.

Shunji clenched his fist.

Shunji: You... How dare you... My father is dead because of your family, why show up now?

Jugard: To finish what my son started of course.

Shunji put up his hand and begin to pray but it was too late, Jugard had already launched him through the church doors, breaking the pinewood on his back and crashing him into the alter. Shunji's eyes were blurry, he could barely see.

Jugard: You can't even use Haki yet. So much you need to learn.

Shunji increased the rate at which he was praying, trying to weave his energy together as quickly as possible.

Jugard: Your father could've weave holy energy without praying. Your faith is weak. Your defense isn't tight enough. Are you even Jacob's son?

Shunji's weaving was over, he drew his two batons.

Shunji: Let's find out.

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10 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Tue Dec 30, 2014 7:19 pm

Jugard: Bring it kid.

Shunji rushed towards Jugard, trailing his batons along the ground. Shunji sprung himself into mid-air, the chapel rug beneath his feet took away from the spring of his jump but he was not faltered in his will to strike. Jugard saw the weakness in the boy's form and struck his two fists into his chest cavity. The force of spin on the punch sent the boy flying backwards, ripping open his chest plate, blood gushed out, and the force knocked the wind out of his body. Shunji drastically gasped for breath, clutching on the rug, he coughed up blood.

Jugard: Your stance is sloppy, your swinging those things like aren't even a part of your body kid. I've had enough... Dragoon Shotgun!

Jugard closed distances between them once more. Shunji created a circular screen to intercept the man's punch using his mental prowess, he analysed how strong the force of the punch was and used his spiritual energy to counter suit but it was futile, the shield shattered and fractured the jaw bone of the Lvneel Commander. Rain poured on the closed Church, Jugard walked closer to Shunji, fear creeped into his heart.

Jugard: Have your ever heard about the Lore of Z? It's your middle name so you should know it's origins?

Shunji searched his mind for the words he wanted to utter, he wanted to tell the man 'piss off, let's continue the fight', however, right now, catching himself was much more important.

Shunji: Jishi-Jishi... never heard of it.

Shunji peered upwards with his right eye closed shut from swelling.

Jugard: People with your bloodline, those eyes, the Tribunal Eyes, the ability to see into a persons soul. Legend goes one day, you'll encounter a woman. Her aura will be the purest you'll ever see. She herself will be an Ancient Weapon known as Valkyrie. Valkyrie's ability is unknown to the world, but it's catastrophic I hear. You will have two choices, befriend her or kill her. If you befriend her, her power will be suppressed forever but if you kill her, you'll gain the power to wipe out nations.


Shunji: Sounds like some fairy tail....


Jugard: Maybe. I would've said that too years ago. Me and your father....

Jugard lit a cigarette and plopped onto the ground.

Jugard: We used to be Vice Admirals a long time ago in the Navy. Your father's prayers were extraordinary... some people compared it to magic, he was known as the Phantom Pope and at the time, we thought, if anyone was to become an Admiral it was him. Until... He met a salve girl, Katrina-

Shunji's left eye opened wider, as the right one was closed shut.

Jugard: Little did he know, she was much more to his destiny than evil he had to overlook for the good of justice. His eyes, his Tribunal Eyes were captivated by her and as such, he helped her escape and stole three treasures from the Navy that day. One, was her, the Ancient Weapon, Valkyrie. Second, the Hoshi Hoshi no Mi, that was guarded in the Heart of Enies Lobby and finally, me. Not to brag kid but, we were a pretty big deal. We fled to the Revolutionaries and we became Commanders in no time, your mother was part of a cell, the three of us saved so many lives. When we found out about her powers, your father searched for every method in the world to make sure it never activated. Until one day, we were on our way back from a mission, she was pregnant with you at the time. My son was already causing ruckus in Paradise, your mother and father, they retired in Lvneel, under the protection of the Church and the King. They created a fake life for them, Wraith Family became a household staple. My son, he wanted the Ancient Weapon, hence his constant attacks on Lvneel. When your father found out he'd never give up, he killed himself and my son for the good of this country. That day, I got two letters. One from him and one from your mother.

Jugard gave Shunji the letter his father sent him.

Dear Jugard,

I feel my days coming to end. I've been praying about it lately and I think God is ready for me. Your son is so captivated with my wife's power, sadly old friend, the only way I can save this country and this world from his ambition is to kill us both. As long as I'm alive, only my bloodline can unlock Zeta's Slumber and awaken the goddess Valkyrie. When my son is born, legend states Valkyrie will leave my wife and enter into another vessel. By the time you read this letter, me and your son will already have clashed. I trust you to train him for me, you've always been a better fighter and your prowess with Haki may awaken new heights I could never reach. My wife is more proficient in prayers than me too, you ever believe they used to call me the 'Phantom Pope' Jishi-Jishi. This is goodbye my old friend.

P.S. I have a feeling. He'll be a force much more stronger than I ever was. Maybe, he won't make the mistake of falling for his Valkyrie too. Son, if you read this letter, be wary of the King's son, Tiger. My eyes see a darkness in him that extends this small nation.
Tears filled Shunji's eyes until it hurt to cry from the injury.

Jugard: Ha. Could you believe it? The man who killed my son, asking me to train his own. What a riot. However-

Jugard's eyes were filled with tears as well.

Jugard: Who am I to turn down a dying man's wish? Now Shunji!

Jugard lift Shunji up by his collar and gave him the second letter.


Jugard: This is from your mother. It's pretty short.


Dear Jugard,

I don't care what back water ocean your hiding your ass in. Help my son Shield. If he's ever to master my prayers and his father's bloodline, he'll need your help.

PS: Tell my son, I love him.

Jugard: I'll train you but you'll have to forsake this army. Tiger is using Lvneel as a cover to sell drugs and slaves in the port town. Ember City was were his explosives and guns were held, that's why it lit up when your father did his Supernova attack, I didn't think he meant to die that day, that idiot isn't the romantic type like that. It'll take two years, my training will be rough but I'll make sure you can use at least two of your three Haki's.

Shunji wiped the tears from his eyes and stood up.

Shunji: I accept your offer. I want to be stronger. I'm weak.

Jugard: Perfect. As for prayers, I can't help you with that, however my associate can. Meet Rylia Carter, she's a Bishop and Paladin from a Church in the New World. They call her the 'Murdering Nun'. She's a riot-

The woman planted her high heels into Jugard's head knocking him to the ground.

Rylia: I'm a loving woman. Nice to meet you Shunji. Your father used to speak fondly of you in our letters to each other. My training will be strict but I will bringing you closer to enlightenment, the rest is all up to you.

Shunji's tough days were about to begin.

Rylia: But first. Song Bird! Fire Song!

Rylia set his Church house on fire.

Rylia: Shunji Z. Wraith died in this fire today. We need a perfect cover story.

Lvneel's Hero Died in Arsonist Attack!

Rylia F. Carter:


Name: Rylia F. Carter
Tier 4
Occupation: Minstrel / Bishop

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11 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Fri Jan 02, 2015 2:21 am

Chapter 5: 2Y of Hell
 
My training began on Kent Island, off the coast of Lvneel, the island was home to ancient ruins of a civilization native to the North Blue natives. My regimen was prayer mastery in the morning and combat training in the evening. 

Rylia: Now then, I see you can already weave spiritual energy but do you know what it is?

Shunji: My father and mother always said it was just accepting God's governance into your life.

Rylia: Well that's one way to look at it. In this world, they are various kinds of energies. One of them, is what can be referred to as spiritual energy. It's the energy of the Holy, something that is bestowed upon those who are able to connect to the same consciousness that God exists on. It's not magic, it's more faith. Prayers allow you conduct miracles, small ones to even grand ones at the cost for accumulated spiritual energy. However, the moment your faith wavers, it's curtains. The energy leaves you. Fear. Anger. Revenge. These things will weaken your faith. For this next two years, I'm going to train you in how to control your emotions. So let's get started.

Rylia pulled out some rope and a sinister smile filled her face. She also had a blind fold and a rosary strung with beads. Rylia took Shunji to a waterfall on the island.

Rylia: You need to be able to weave energy in the harshest of conditions. Even when your mental focus is at it's peak, so as such, meditation is your first tool.

Rylia blind folded Shunji and placed the rosary around his neck. Stripping his clothes off and tying his feet together, she threw Shunji underneath the falling waterfall, where he was to pray for the next couple days.

Rylia: You'll do this every day for the next six months. After that, we can begin actually learning the other prayers. Oh, you can't move or eat until you reach total and complete mental exhaustion, that's when you'll rely on your spiritual energy to sustain your body. It'll be rough kid! However, if you can become anything like your father, you'll be better off.

Shunji [thoughts]: It was rough. My body experienced a cold and frustration that my words couldn't even manage or dare to illustrate. My body was immersed in holy energy of sorts, I was cold, yet I wasn't. Hungry, yet I wasn't. Tired, yet, energetic. When I came from under the waterfall, I could weave energy like how human's breath, all I needed to do was to recite the 'Opening' prayer of sorts.


Six Months Later....

Rylia: Congratulations kid! Now for the hardest part. The prayers you know so far, are basic. These next five skills I'm about to show you, put great strain on your body, so I'll only be able to teach you them one every day for your sakes. The first, is Prayer of Origin. It's like a reformed version of the prayer of Beginning and it gives you access to all Prayers you'll be using from now onwards.

Rylia began reciting:

Rylia: Oh Lord, our savior who has ascending to the heavens and walked the earth for our sins. Give us your humble servants and creations the power to triumph in the face of animosity and evil.

Opening her eyes, her body was encased in a thin layer of white aura.

Rylia: Prayer of Detection!

Rylia shot an arrow at Shunji.

Rylia: Question, have you ever kissed a girl?

Shunji: What sort!-, of course!-

A black veil surrounded Shunji, he fell to the ground from the sensations of pins digging into his flesh.

Rylia: Prayer of Detection allows you to use your spiritual energy as a lie detector of sorts. The afflicted that lies is effected by a dark energy, vice versa, if you told the truth, the user is effected by the dark energy. Next up, Prayer of Building!

Rylia created a series of cubes around her body. Jumping on the cubes, she sat folding her legs as the cubes hovered off the grounds.

Rylia: This one allows you to make spiritual building blocks. More of a supportive skill than offensive and it's nifty in various scenarios.

Rylia began to jump from cube to cube.

Rylia: Eventually, when you get to my level you'll be able to do this-

Rylia create eight cubes and teleported between all of them scattered across a five meter radius.

Shunji: You just teleported!

Rylia: Well, it's more like I asked the spiritual consciousness to place my body there but sure, let's go with that! Next up! Prayer of Exchange!

Closing her eyes, the woman began to talk to Shunji in the form of mental words.

Rylia: This skill is useful for talking to your nakama when your in peril situations where too much physical noise forbids words to work. Finally, Prayer of Victory!

Rylia jumped off the cubes and stabbed her hand in Shunji's shoulder. Then, her body began to pulsate a soothing aura which closed the wound up completely.

Rylia: Those conclude your skillset at the intermediate level. When you master these, the others prayers in your father's journal will be useful to you. Though, some of them need certain Holy items you'll need to collect but that's entirely up to you. Now let's start, Prayer of Origin, think grateful and peace of mind.

After six months passed, Shunji had mastered the five prayers. His training with Rylia was completed. Rylia escorted Shunji to the underground cavern, where Jugard waited for over a year in mediation.

Jugard: I won't be as easy as she was kid. Your fighting is atrocious before we even begin to look at Haki, I'll teach you how to fight.

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12 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Fri Jan 02, 2015 9:06 am

Jugard smacked Shunji around the floors of the underground cavern. The sharp shells and rocks on the cavern's floor scarred the blue head's body in an array of scars. Shunji tried to clutch his batons and fight back, attempting to slam them into Jugard's legs but he jumped, high kicking Shunji into the wall and causing blood to spew from his mouth. Jugard grabbed Shunji's batons and tossed them away, slamming his right fist into his mid-section.

Jugard: A little bit better, your form has improved but your still too weak for Haki training.

Shunji: Haki... what is that anyway?

Jugard: A mysterious power that lies within every human being, no more like every living thing. It's just some people have the ability to realize it's existence and use it and others can't. Whether you do learn of it or don't, it's there. They are three kinds of Haki.

Jugard fired off a punch into the cavern walls, causing a series of stalagmites to fall from the ceiling. Dodging each of them one by one, as he now danced around the cave, it was as if he knew where each one would land.

Jugard: One of them is a sixth sense of sorts, it's referred to as Kenbunshoku. It also permits the user to sense concealed enemies or allies, a mind's eye of sorts really.

Jugard coated his hand in Busoshoku and leaned it out towards Shunji.

Jugard: Punch my hand as hard as you can.

Shunji got up and rushed towards Jugard putting his all into the punch but it felt as though Shunji hit a brick wall. The sound of Shunji's hand fracturing echoed throughout the cave, Shunji crying out in pain barely heard the man's explanation.

Jugard: Not that hard punk. However, essentially, this Haki is an invisible armor. As for the third one... I'm not fit to teach you that, since, I can't use it. However, Haoshoku was a skill your father could use. It's different from the two prior, in that, not everyone can use it. You can call it and acquired taste of sorts. However, these skills don't matter, I'll teach you how to properly fight. First off, keep your guard up at all times...

The times in the cavern were tough. Eventually Shunji's inept for close combat was molded by the countless beatings he took from Jugard. The two years were finally up and Shunji returned to Lvneel main capital city, it was ridden with bodies and poverty. Tiger had tried out some new Amber Lead bomb he had bought from some dark brokers. Shunji's rage sky rocketed.

Jugard: The poor city... is this the King they deserve.

Rylia: Horrible. The smell of death is everywhere.  

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13 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Fri Jan 02, 2015 9:34 am

After his return to Lvneel, Shunji gathered information on what exactly happened in the Capital. Lvneel entered into a war with the Brig Kingdom in his two year absence, the war was tipping in Tiger's favor because of all of the black market weapons he was purchasing. With Shunji absent as a Commander, he was quickly replaced by a mercenary called Bollan. Lvneel's army had become a force to reckon, even Tiger himself was skilled in combat. The revolution Shunji was planning had yet to be exposed and most of his men had now infiltrated the army. However, with the increase in power, they found it futile to cause a coup d'etat. The spot of general in the army had been empty for decades since Shunji's father had retired from the army, after doing his due service and the King decided to throw a tournament for who will become the next General in his army. Shunji new this would be the perfect time for the rebellion to spark.

Shunji: There's only one thing I'm missing.

Jugard: What's that?

Shunji: My father's keep sake. The Hoshi Hoshi No Mi, with it's power, I know I can trump the King's guard.

Jugard: A Devil Fruit huh.... I won't deny the raw power the Hoshi Hoshi fruit has but it's not easily tamed. It took your father forever to balance out how much power he can omit without making it disadvantageous on the battle field.

Shunji was pondering. Where could the fruit be after all these years?

Jugard: My bet is that Tiger has the fruit hidden within the castle.

Shunji: I need to recover it then.

The tournament commenced shortly after the conversation the trio was having in the stands of the coliseum. The King addressed the public and presenting a chest as the prize.

Tiger: For years... Our people have had a beautiful relationship with the Wraith Church. However, after the arsonist, who has yet to be found, burned down their family home, killing their only heir! and our beloved hero for his work in Ember City, Shunji Z. Wraith perished that day. However! They're will still lives on in this box, the fruit that was to be awarded to Shunji for his loyalty, will now be passed onto our new general. I give you!

Tiger opened the box smirking.

Tiger: The Devil Fruit that represents man's interest in the space above.... The Hoshi Hoshi No Mi, a fruit that allows a man to radiate with the intensity of a star. Hotter than fire, magma and even lightning. This fruit is truly made for a champion, a hero... no a general! May the best man win. They'll be seven competitors in the tournament today-

Shunji: Make that eight.

Shunji now stood, ripping off his brown cloak and stepping onto the battlefield. Lighting a cigarette, he took a few puff before blowing out the smoke which now encompassed the space above his spiky hair.

Crowd: Lvneel's Hero Lives! Shunji! Shunji! We love you Wraith!

Tiger: Oh my god... Your alive my old friend.

Shunji: Back to claim my father's namesake and defend this city's honor.

Tiger: Perfect! Commander Shunji! Commander Jessica! Fleet Aid Kaza! Commander Bollan! Commander Ten! Commander Peter! Commander Jacklin! and Commander Chelsie! You are the eight contestants for the position as General! May the God's be with you.

The King's right hand man whispered into his ear after the competition commenced.

Sena: Are you sure it's wise to let him compete for this fruit, knowing that he's the leader of the Revolutionary Army?

Tiger: I knew that all along. The way he stares at me so earnestly. Like a jackal waiting to pounce. However, he's this Kingdom's hero. I can't have the people loose any more favor of me executing him. Once he dies in this tournament, then, there's nothing left standing in my way. Were on the verge of defeating the Brig Kingdom, let's just sit back and watch the show.

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14 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Fri Jan 02, 2015 4:51 pm

NPC's for final chapter:


Name: Aid Kaza
Tier 2
Occupation: Swordsman

Name: Jessica Airs
Tier 2
Occupation: Surgeon / Bishop

Name: Bollan Storm
Tier 3
Occupation: Swordsman / Assassin

Name: Ten Sogu
Tier 2
Occupation: Martial Artist / Cook

Name: Benny Benny Jacklin
Tier 3
Occupation: Sniper / Gunslinger

Name: Chelsie Road
Tier 2
Occupation: Bard / Ninja  

Name: Tiger Lvneel IV
Tier 2
Occupation: Swordsman

Name: Sena
Tier 3
Occupation: Gunslinger / Rogue


The tournament commenced all of these ego's in one arena. The contestants were divided up into two blocks, A and B, the winner of each block would complete in the final round. Block A consisted of Shunji, Chelsie Road, Benny Benny Jacklin and Aid Kaza while B Bock consisted of the latter. The first match of A Block was Benny Benny Jacklin versus Chelsie Road.

Benny: This should be suuuuper easy. Pohoho...

Chelsie: I hate arrogant men. Die.

Sena: Who do you have to win this round my liege?

Tiger: Benny of course. Once praised as the number one Sniper in the South Blue, I can't see him losing to anyone in this block, even Shunji used to struggle against him in group trainings. Speed, precision and versatility. With those two pistols no one's better. His former bounty is nothing to scoff at either, the 50,000,000 Million dollar man, Benny Benny 'Target' Jacklin.

Sena: It seems Miss Road may be over her head.

Road: Weiss Melody! Anyone that hears my song will automatically start dancing in a silly manner! Let's dance big boy!

Benny body started to boogy to the rhythm of the woman's voice. He had yet to pull his pistols and was enjoying the dance.

Benny: I haven't heard such a sweet voice in forever. Oh yeah, party!

Road: Now then! Shadow Shadow Jutsu! Ninpon!

Road conjured a black katana and rushed towards Bollan, attempting to cut off his neck.

Benny: Hoho... I guess play time is over.

With his eyes barely open, Benny began to empty his pistols into the ninja's shoulders. Her movements were precise in origin but his keen eye picked out the small woman's vitals from about eight meters away.

Road: I- impossible.

Benny: That's the end, lady. Bang!

Benny fired a single bullet through the woman's skull, the crowd cringed in horror, diverting their eyes from the arena.

Tiger: Winner, Benny Jacklin!

Benny titled his cowboy hat to the King and exited the arena. Road's body was scooped up and dropped in the infirmary. Shunji sat in mediation after praying for around ten minutes are so, he opened his eyes and stood up to stretch. On his way out of the arena, he passed Benny who reeked of gun power.

Benny: You should've stayed dead, kid. Pohohoho...

Shunji: I'll see you in the finals, Benny.


Techniques:


Tier 2 Technique Name: Prayer of Origin
Tier 2 Technique Type: Support
Tier 2 Technique Cooldown: 15
Tier 2 Technique Description:
For a duration of three posts, user begins an ancient sacred prayer that creates a link between his diety and himself for a few seconds. The user obtains a higher level of consciousness and clarity. This gives him access to a series of prayers. 0/3
Tier 2 Technique Strengths:
- Can be used in place for the prayer of Beginning.
- Unlocks the remainder of the Tier 2 Prayers of this skill set.
Tier 2 Technique Weaknesses:
- If the users concentration is broken, prayer takes twice amount of time to be completed. (Duration increased to six posts)
- If the prayer fails, user must wait an additional ‘three’ posts, eighteen in total on the cool down.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Prayer of Beginning
Tier 1 Technique Type: Support / Close Range
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 5
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Shunji begins praying to his deity and asking for guidance in this world and life. He begins repentance for all the sins he as committed lately and asks for his spiritual abilities to be awakened. This skill must be done for a duration of two posts, user repeats a holy hymn and finishes with ‘Amen’. 0/2
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
- Unlocks the Tier 1 Skill’s for this skill set, expect Prayer of Shift.
- Weaves users spiritual energy to peak capacity.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- If the users concentration is broken, prayer takes twice amount of time to be completed. (Duration increased to four)
- If the prayer fails, user must wait an additional ‘three’ posts, eight in total on the cool down.

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15 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Fri Jan 02, 2015 10:44 pm

Announcer: The second round of A Block will be Shunji Wraith versus Aid Kaza! The man praised for his mastery of the four blade art. Who will pull out on top!?

Shunji: May the Lord guide my path...

Shunji continued to pray relentlessly in the middle of the battlefield.

Kaza: Praying won't save you Shunji. When you left, this country struggled without you. We don't need heroes, we need leaders!

Kaza drew his four blades, two in his hand and another two clutched between his knees.

Shunji: I'll be on the defensive for a while Kaza, do your worst.

Kaza: My enemy taunts me with pleas of defense. Petal Shoot!

Kaza shot off the blades between his knees towards Shunji like a top. Dashing towards Shunji, he encompassed his body's width with his two blades.

Kaza: Aroma Death Slicer!

Shunji pulled out his iron batons and intercepted the blades. Parrying slightly, predicting the course of the flying blades course. Kaza pulled some strings he had attached to the flying kodachis, after a closer look they weren't full sized katanas. Shunji hopped around the field, began to close the distance between Kaza and himself. Shoving his baton into Kaza's adam's apple, he caused the man to gasp for air, the two fighters clashed their weapons together, the sound of the clash made it almost impossible to divert your eyes from the action. One moment missed, you wouldn't see the victor strike his finishing blow. Shunji smacked his baton into the man's knee cap causing his body to buckle under the weight. Shunji used the man's stooped knee as a catapult and flipping over his body, struck the man in his ear. Kaza's body fell to the ground but in a blind feet he slashed at Shunji's legs missing by a measly two centimeters.

Kaza: Same old running away Shunji. Your prayers are your greatest strength but can you keep this up until God's intervention comes!?

Shunji: I'm not as weak as before Kaza, try me.

Kaza rushing towards Shunji, regaining his footing, Kaza jumped into mid-air, swiping open Shunji's shoulder. The Knight's blade ripped through the blue head's shoulder, his blood filled the air and the Lvneel audience gasped.

Kaza placed his blades into his sheath.

Kaza: Give up now. It's pointless.

Shunji dropped down to his knees, panting heavily from the immense movements and now loss of blood.

Shunji: In his word... I am strengthened.

Shunji continued praying.


Techniques:


Tier 2 Technique Name: Prayer of Origin
Tier 2 Technique Type: Support
Tier 2 Technique Cooldown: 15
Tier 2 Technique Description:
For a duration of three posts, user begins an ancient sacred prayer that creates a link between his diety and himself for a few seconds. The user obtains a higher level of consciousness and clarity. This gives him access to a series of prayers. 1/3
Tier 2 Technique Strengths:
- Can be used in place for the prayer of Beginning.
- Unlocks the remainder of the Tier 2 Prayers of this skill set.
Tier 2 Technique Weaknesses:
- If the users concentration is broken, prayer takes twice amount of time to be completed. (Duration increased to six posts)
- If the prayer fails, user must wait an additional ‘three’ posts, eighteen in total on the cool down.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Prayer of Beginning
Tier 1 Technique Type: Support / Close Range
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 5
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Shunji begins praying to his deity and asking for guidance in this world and life. He begins repentance for all the sins he as committed lately and asks for his spiritual abilities to be awakened. This skill must be done for a duration of two posts, user repeats a holy hymn and finishes with ‘Amen’. 1/2
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
- Unlocks the Tier 1 Skill’s for this skill set, expect Prayer of Shift.
- Weaves users spiritual energy to peak capacity.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- If the users concentration is broken, prayer takes twice amount of time to be completed. (Duration increased to four)
- If the prayer fails, user must wait an additional ‘three’ posts, eight in total on the cool down.

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16 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Fri Jan 02, 2015 11:11 pm

Shunji: Amen.

A field of white aura plummeted around Shunji's body.

Kaza: Now maybe I'll see those famed 'Eyes of Zion'. 

Shunji: Tribunal Eyes! I can see... your aura. It's tainted Kaza. Tainted by the sins of this Kingdom. Prayer of Will! 

Shunji's white aura began to go crazy. Swirling around his body, the boy disappeared. Reappearing or so it seems, Shunji just moved out of Kaza's line of vision and planted his baton's in the man's neck. Releasing grip on them, Shunji began to fire a barrage of haymakers to Kaza's body. His body cringed from the wicked powerful shots, the constant pummeling caused bruises on his rib cage. The right hook to Kaza's face knocked him off his feet, swelling his right eye completely shut. Shunji then fired a barrage of kicks into Kaza's mid-section, the attack was relentlessly and did not let up until Shunji could kick no more. It was like a train, ramming it's weight into an unfortunate victim on the tracks. Kaza's bloody body fell to the ground and he passed out. The crowd gave out a roar because the scene that had just unfolded before them was for a lack of words, jaw dropping.

Tiger: Winner! Shunji Wraith! Lvneel's Hero has triumphed.

Shunji: Prayer of Healing!

Shunji closed up the opened gash on his right shoulder.

Tiger: Wow. Wow. Yes... That's it! That's the warrior that captivates the hearts of his people. I want them even now, his eyes... I'll have them as my own when Bollan rips open his corpse.

Ten: Or Benny... who knows.

Tiger: That is true. How will you fear in the next round Shunji?


Techniques:


Tier 1 Technique Name: Prayer of Beginning
Tier 1 Technique Type: Support / Close Range
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 5
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Shunji begins praying to his deity and asking for guidance in this world and life. He begins repentance for all the sins he as committed lately and asks for his spiritual abilities to be awakened. This skill must be done for a duration of two posts, user repeats a holy hymn and finishes with ‘Amen’. 2/2
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
- Unlocks the Tier 1 Skill’s for this skill set, expect Prayer of Shift.
- Weaves users spiritual energy to peak capacity.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- If the users concentration is broken, prayer takes twice amount of time to be completed. (Duration increased to four)
- If the prayer fails, user must wait an additional ‘three’ posts, eight in total on the cool down.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Prayer of Healing : Wall Sugery
Tier 1 Technique Type: Support / Close Range
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 0/10
Tier 1 Technique Description:
For a duration of one post, user releases his spiritual energy to create a platform to lay one patient on. His energy begins to spin itself around the patient and heals the afflicted of exactly one wound or condition.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
- The condition or wound must be within the user’s medical knowledge.
- The prayer can be used on the user.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- Only one wound can be healed. I.E if the person has a fractured hand and an open gash, the external wound will be healed first, and the prayer will be completed.
- The prayer of Beginning must be completed before this skill is used.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Prayer of Will!
Tier 1 Technique Type: Close - Range / Support
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 0/10
Tier 1 Technique Description:
For a duration of two posts, user boosts the afflicted, amplifying there physical and spiritual strength by a significant range. The afflicted feels as if his body has been exorcised of negative energy, feeling lighter and more focused. 0/2
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
- One attack’s damage is amplified, if contact is made, one Tier higher than original.
- Afflicted exhibits increased cognitive and physical motion for a duration of one post.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- The prayer of Beginning must be completed before this skill is used.
- This skill puts the afflicted into extreme spiritual imbalance afterwards, the user experiences mass hysteria and vomitting for two posts.


Tier 2 Technique Name: Prayer of Origin
Tier 2 Technique Type: Support
Tier 2 Technique Cooldown: 2/15
Tier 2 Technique Description:
For a duration of three posts, user begins an ancient sacred prayer that creates a link between his diety and himself for a few seconds. The user obtains a higher level of consciousness and clarity. This gives him access to a series of prayers. 2/3
Tier 2 Technique Strengths:
- Can be used in place for the prayer of Beginning.
- Unlocks the remainder of the Tier 2 Prayers of this skill set.
Tier 2 Technique Weaknesses:
- If the users concentration is broken, prayer takes twice amount of time to be completed. (Duration increased to six posts)
- If the prayer fails, user must wait an additional ‘three’ posts, eighteen in total on the cool down.



Jugard waited for Shunji in the rafter's of the arena entrance.

Jugard: You did well hiding your prayers... but your fighting was sloppy. You need to relax a bit more.

Shunji: Yeah but it took more out of me than expected. Kaza is a great fighter but against me now, that could've ended much worst.

Jugard: You've gotten vain.

Shunji: Jishi-Jishi... Nah, I'm just having fun more.

Jugard: Be careful against Benny, he's around that Bollan kid's level.

Shunji: I know.

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17 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Sat Jan 03, 2015 12:03 am

 Chapter 7: Shunji Versus Benny Benny Jacklin! The Winner of A Block Decided!

Announcer: The finals of A Block Begin now! Benny Jacklin versus Shunji Wraith!

Benny: Pohohoho....

Benny laughed, his body vibrating all around like a wind up doll. His half closed eyes now opened fully.

Benny: You have no chance against me Shunji-chan.

Shunji: You might be a psychopath Benny but my spirit energy is weaved. This won't be like my fight with Kaza.

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Rylia: Your using it wrong. The Prayer of Will is like a spiritual steroid as such. It shuts off your physical senses, allowing you to move faster than your weight, muscles or even body permits. However, once it shuts off, all of the movements, sprains and stress your body accumulated will return. Use it wisely.

Shunji: What happens if I push my body too much during the process?

Rylia: You could very well ruin yourself for future fights, The Prayer of Will is your final card, don't ever use it unless your opponent is clear cut stronger than you.


Benny: I'll get started Pohohoho.... Druid Shot! See these guns of mine, they are cursed guns Shunji. Each bullet is fused in dark energy... It counters your Holy powers... Your priest abilities will be futile against me.

The bullets flew towards Shunji covered in black fire, the shot bullets fired Shunji into the walls of the coliseum, almost setting him on fire until his orb barrier absorbs it's flames and negative energy. Shunji dashed back towards Benny, dragging his batons against the ground. Benny changed his bullets and took aimed with a scope.

Benny: Fairy Shot!

The force of the bullets blinded the approaching man, the two shotgun shells split into twenty smaller bullets impaling Shunji's body all over.

Benny: Voodoo Rope!

Switching to his handguns, Benny fired off a series of single shots which created black rope on objects upon contact. The rope spreads over a two meter radius and was tangling a tight web that would inhibit Shunji's movements. The Paladin's movements became faster and faster, he closed in to the gunslinger quickly. Tossing his baton's Benny's eyes, he impaired his vision for a moment. Slide kick to the sniper's footing, the force of the strike made Benny's stance non-existent. A spiritual appendage struck the marksman as he fell, swatting him into the ground. The whiplash of Benny's neck hitting against the ground, disoriented his thinking momentarily.

Shunji: I got one shot at this. This is all my energy weaved into one blow,Spinning Strike - Zionist Roar!

All the converging spiritual energy merged at one point delivering a tremendous spinning blow into Benny's mid-section. The fat bloke gave out a thrilling cough, filled with the blood from his now fractured rib cage, three, it felt like three, the man thought, ribs broken. The force of the punch caused the coliseum's flooring to crack.

Shunji: I'm at my limit but I must push through-

Shunji began vomiting violently and uncontrollably. The taste of intestinal acids and blood filled the man's sense of smell and tormented his palate. Benny grabbed his shotgun from his back and fired off a pink shell towards Shunji.

Benny: Brick Bomb! When this shell touches you, it'll rip away your flesh kid.

Shunji vomiting uttering out the words:

Shunji: Fire Wall!

A spiritual wall summoned from mass typing on Shunji's keypad that popped under finger tips absorbed the weight of the blow. The shock-wave from firing his shotgun, fracture Benny's right hand.

Shunji was losing fluids and blood quickly. Clutching for his batons and Benny clutching for his handguns. The exchanged a flurry of baton strikes and bullet shots, vomit barely kept in the stomach of Shunji, he began to hallucinate.

Shunji: Argh!!!

Benny: Argh!!!

Benny placed his hangun towards Shunji's shoulder and Shunji stabbed his baton's into Benny's chest cage. Benny dropped to the floor, his blood trickling out onto the coliseum floor. Shunji gave out the scream and the people of Lvneel responded.

Crowd: Shunji! Shunji! Shunji!

Tears came from his eyes.

Shunji: Do not praise me for this brutality... Tiger's enjoying every moment of this.

Shunji said as quietly as he could spewing his brains all over the floor and clutching his chest. Shunji began hyper-ventilating.  

Tiger: Winner of A Block! Shunji Wraith!

Techniques:


Tier 1 Technique Name: Prayer of Beginning
Tier 1 Technique Type: Support / Close Range
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 5
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Shunji begins praying to his deity and asking for guidance in this world and life. He begins repentance for all the sins he as committed lately and asks for his spiritual abilities to be awakened. This skill must be done for a duration of two posts, user repeats a holy hymn and finishes with ‘Amen’. 2/2
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
- Unlocks the Tier 1 Skill’s for this skill set, expect Prayer of Shift.
- Weaves users spiritual energy to peak capacity.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- If the users concentration is broken, prayer takes twice amount of time to be completed. (Duration increased to four)
- If the prayer fails, user must wait an additional ‘three’ posts, eight in total on the cool down.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Prayer of Healing : Wall Sugery
Tier 1 Technique Type: Support / Close Range
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 1/10
Tier 1 Technique Description:
For a duration of one post, user releases his spiritual energy to create a platform to lay one patient on. His energy begins to spin itself around the patient and heals the afflicted of exactly one wound or condition.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
- The condition or wound must be within the user’s medical knowledge.
- The prayer can be used on the user.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- Only one wound can be healed. I.E if the person has a fractured hand and an open gash, the external wound will be healed first, and the prayer will be completed.
- The prayer of Beginning must be completed before this skill is used.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Prayer of Will!
Tier 1 Technique Type: Close - Range / Support
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 1/10
Tier 1 Technique Description:
For a duration of two posts, user boosts the afflicted, amplifying there physical and spiritual strength by a significant range. The afflicted feels as if his body has been exorcised of negative energy, feeling lighter and more focused. 1/2
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
- One attack’s damage is amplified, if contact is made, one Tier higher than original.
- Afflicted exhibits increased cognitive and physical motion for a duration of one post.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- The prayer of Beginning must be completed before this skill is used.
- This skill puts the afflicted into extreme spiritual imbalance afterwards, the user experiences mass hysteria and vomitting for two posts.


Tier 2 Technique Name: Prayer of Origin
Tier 2 Technique Type: Support
Tier 2 Technique Cooldown: 3/15
Tier 2 Technique Description:
For a duration of three posts, user begins an ancient sacred prayer that creates a link between his diety and himself for a few seconds. The user obtains a higher level of consciousness and clarity. This gives him access to a series of prayers. 3/3
Tier 2 Technique Strengths:
- Can be used in place for the prayer of Beginning.
- Unlocks the remainder of the Tier 2 Prayers of this skill set.
Tier 2 Technique Weaknesses:
- If the users concentration is broken, prayer takes twice amount of time to be completed. (Duration increased to six posts)
- If the prayer fails, user must wait an additional ‘three’ posts, eighteen in total on the cool down.

Lineage Skill: 0/10 (Mental File)

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18 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Sat Jan 03, 2015 12:47 am

Jugard: He's in no condition to continue! Men! Rise now! Shunji Z. Wraith! Leader of the revolution! Kill the King!

Suddenly, from the crowd, mass bodies of armed men rose, jumping down from the stands, the soldiers charged the castle, trying to find Tiger and capture his head.

Rylia: I guess I can help the kid out this one time. He'll need time to rest.


Shunji: Prayer of Victory!

The wave of energy cured Shunji's injuries slowly buy surely, every opened bullet hole, every bullet rejected, every gashed closed and burns faded. However, the vomiting and headaches continued with no end.

Bollan roared throughout the building, striking fears into the heart of every man, child and woman present. They tried to evacuate the coliseum, all eight hundred onlookers. Bollan drew his cursed blade which ate the souls of all of those who couldn't escape in time, two hundred in count. Licking the blade, he swiped off the excess energy causing shock-waves throughout the whole place.  

Tiger: We had an agreement Bollan. No eating souls.

Bollan: Idiot. I was waiting for that boy throw this rebellion! It's the World Governments way to invade this country finally. Geppo!

Bollan sky-walked to the King's sky box stabbing his katana through his assistants chest cage, draining his soul dry. Bollan smiled a deadly smile, ripping off Tiger's head.

Bollan: Tiger Lvneel... I hereby execute you in the name of the Cipher Pol and in the good will of the World Government.

Meanwhile...


Rylia: Your wounds... They much more vast than I expected. He's infected you with a Amber Lead poisoning... Unfortunately kid, there's no cure. However, there's no more need for a woman, whose beloved married another woman. Maybe... I can save his son. Even in death, I'd move moons for him, Jacob. I'll save your son.

Those were the last words Shunji heard before he passed out.

Rylia: Prayer of Sacrifice! This prayer transfers all of my life force into your body. It'll cure all illness of and not of this world. All of my secrets, all of my moments, all of my life is yours. Finally, take this.

Rylia wrapped the rosary around Shunji's neck.

Rylia: It looks like a pacifier but it'll help you later on your journeys. Goodbye kid. Live strong.... I can't believe I'm crying here... I'm so glad your sleeping.

On the Castle Patio


The remaining commanders gathered and tried to avenge the King by attacking Bollan.

Bollan: Jessica. I've had enough of the charades, dispose of the rest of them.

Jessica: Soru! Shigan - White Lotus Assassination.

Jessica's shigan ripped through the skin of Ten and Road, killing them instantly.

Bollan: Sena... Stop faking your death. Get up.

Sena: I was having fun, Hoho. The King literally thought I was working for him. Sucker.

Bollan: It's time. Set the coliseum on fire.

Bollan pulled out his Den Den Mushi.

Bollan: Jugard... Destroy the castle... I trust you are in place.

Jugard: This was not part of the plan Bollan.

Bollan: I only did this tournament for the Hoshi Hoshi.

Jugard: I think that's not going to happen. We are Cipher Pol rejects... Unless we turn this Kingdom over to the World Government, we can't return to Mother Six. Besides, I quit. I've had enough of playing spies, think of this castle's destruction as my parting gift. Rankyaku! Air of the Zephyr!

Jugard's attack flattened the Castles Walls. Jugard used Geppo over to a ship nearby in the Castle's custom port and set sail. Jugard now had Shunji strapped over his shoulder's with the Hoshi Hoshi in hand, he threw the kid onto a ship and set it afloat, cutting the sails loose so the boat drifted off into the sunset. Using a mere tone dial, Jugard recorded the following message to be played back once and only once.

Jugard: If your listening to this I'll be dead and your probably hate me when your read the newspapers. I won't let you get into our internal dispute. The truth was... Your father did kill my son all of those years ago. He was part of the Cipher Pol Six. We specialize espionage. When your father realized that we had infiltrated so deeply into the Church and the Kingdom, he confronted my son, who was pretending to be the leader of the Shield Pirates. It was all for Bollan, Jessica and Sena to infiltrate, rising Tiger to power. With the former King, assassinated by Jessica, Bollan was able to pull the strings how he wanted, however, I had always planned to give you the Hoshi Hoshi. One day... You will save this nation but as you are now. Your weak. Not even me in my old age can stand up to Bollan, you'll need way more power than you have now. I will now reveal the Cipher Pol Six's final plan. A fake King will be appointed in Sena, a native to Lvneel. Through him, the World Government will sign a treaty in the years to come. You becoming the leader of the rebellion but plots in Mother Six's plan, so I was sent to kill you that day. Rohohoho... I've gotten old and soft. Rylia was also once, Cipher Pol. Us, training you, gave us hope for the future. Save this town one day Shunji. One day when your stronger... Keep your faith young priest.


Hours Later at the Harbor


Bollan: It's been done. Sena has been appointed the temporary King. Now to deal with this traitor. Any final words... Jugard D. Shield. Your foolish gamble will be blamed for all the sins caused today. I think, I'll let the papers call him the 'Eyes of Zion' as well. I always liked that nickname for him.

Jugard was beaten bloody on his knees, smiling in the face of Bollan's cruel expression.

Jugard: I fear nothing. I've lived out my purpose.

Bollan: I hearby execute you in the name of the Cipher Pol Six and the World Government. Not only, did you let our prime target, the Hoshi Hoshi Fruit escape but you jeopardized the mission. Eat his soul, Storm Bringer.

Jugard died smiling. As the cold steel pierced his body, he was finally at peace, that day Storm Bringer gained no soul, just a dead old man.

The news papers the next day read, Shunji Z. Wraith, murderer of Lvneel's King and mass serial killer. Labelled as the Zionist Paladin, the World Government is still under counsel about his bounty and heinous actions.


TO BE CONTINUED....

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19 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Sat Jan 03, 2015 1:12 am

Finally, Character Log to end this long story topic, they are profiles of reoccuring characters for Shunji's crew to meet:


NPC:


Cipher Pol Six Team Squard Known as 'Hibiscus'


Name: Mother Six
Occupation: Assassin / Scientist
Role: Co-ordinator of Cipher Pol Six Branch - Hibiscus
Tier 2



Name: Bollan Storm
Occupation: Samurai / Assassin
Role: Leader of Hibiscus 
Tier 3




Name: Benny Benny Jacklin
Occupation: Sniper / Gunslinger
Role: Chancellor of Hibiscus
Tier 3



Name: Jessica Airs 
Occupation: Surgeon / Assassin (Was disguised as a Bishop)
Role: Team Member
Tier 3 (Actually)




Name: Sena Frugal
Occupation: Assassin / Ninja
Role: Team Member / Noble
Tier 3 (Actually)


Jugard D. Shield / Rylia F. Carter former members both deceased. Used to be the former leader and Chancellor until Mother Six ordered them to be wiped out during the mission in Lvneel.



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20 Re: 'Eyes of Zion' Lvneel's Hero! on Sat Jan 03, 2015 2:50 pm

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Exp Obtained: 300
Bounty Obtained: 25,000,000 Bounty

-Obtaining the Hoshi Hoshi no Mi
-Returned to Kingdom which led to Rebellion (Unsuccessful)
-Being framed for killing of a King (Cause by Hibiscus)
-Being framed for deaths of hundreds of innocent civilians (Cause by Hibiscus)

*Should treated your mother with more respect.


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