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1 Dancing Flower - Primary || Done on Sun Mar 08, 2015 11:40 am

Skill Name: Dancing Flower
Skill Type: Devil Fruit || Double Headed Scythe || Martial Arts || Blind's Eye || Haki
Skill Information: A beautiful style of fighting, mixed in with the girls girl fruit. Not only that, but its mixed in with some martial art styles. This fighting style consist of her double headed scythe that is able to help her control her plants as well. Not only that but her linage also saves her as well. The user is also at times able to combine her haki into her attacks as well.
Skill Strengths:
-The user is able to control her plants with her weapon
-The user is able to cut the ground, if there is grass she can used it like razor leafs.
-The user is able to control her devil fruit powers and attack with her weapon as well.
-The user is able to transfer her Haki in her weapon.
Skill Weaknesses:
-Extremely big weapon so allies can get hurt in the cross fire,
-Weak against Fire based Elements
-Weak in Snowy Weather
-Cannot do Long Range Attacks.



Tier 1 Technique Name: Lilly's Petals
Tier 1 Technique Type: Feild
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 4 Posts
Tier 1 Technique Description:
The user is able to blind her enemy by blooming flower petals on the handle of Hime. The Flower petals then fall off and cover the enemies vision. Doing this gives her the advantage against someone. The Flower petals are able to cover to cover a 5 meter distance, and enemies and allies who are in this 5 meter distance can be blinded as well.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
-Killua is not effected because she is blind.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
-Allies can also be blind as well as enemies.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Tigerlilly's Roar
Tier 1 Technique Type: Melee
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 5 Posts
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Turning 360 degrees, and slicing the ground as well. The user is able to send the plants around her up from the ground and towards the enemy like a wave. It has a 5 meter radius around her. Allies will be unharmed.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
-The user actually has the ability to control the plant life and move around allies
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
-If there is no grass or anything plant related underneath the user, then it cannot be used.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Juniper's Leap
Tier 1 Technique Type: Melee
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 2
Tier 1 Technique Description:
The user jumps into the hair and does flips in the air until she almost resembles a wheel. Going down on the enemy. When going down. She leaves a crater almost and keeps spinning for about 2 meters. The attack gives her more movementum and speed. She uses her keen scope to know where her target is.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
Killa is able to control where she goes.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
Can hurt an allie

Tier 1 Technique Name: Pansy's Sheild
Tier 1 Technique Type: Support//Defensive
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 4 Posts
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Almost like a barrier, the user spins the double handed scythe in front of her. Blocking anything that is thrown at her. She is able to block bullets, daggers, as well as some elements. She does this with Keen Scope as well. She is also able to protect people as well.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
Able to create almost a shield like all around her body.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
Cannot user her abilities when using this one.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Bramble's Claws
Tier 1 Technique Type: Melee
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 5 Posts
Tier 1 Technique Description:
The Double Handed scythes are harden with haki. Where the user is able to use against Logia users as well as regular users.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
-lasts for about 3 posts
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
-cannot use her devil fruit when holding the haki covered double scythe.

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2 Re: Dancing Flower - Primary || Done on Mon Apr 06, 2015 3:27 pm


Bolded black text are the corrections. Your own text that is bolded/black with an asterisk next to it are grammar corrections that make the writing confusing and/or hard to understand, making it necessary to correct them.
Skill Name: Dancing Flower
Skill Type: Devil Fruit || Double Headed Scythe || Martial Arts || Blind's Eye || Haki
Skill Information: A beautiful style of fighting, mixed in with the girls *girl fruit. Not only that, but its mixed in with some martial art styles. This fighting style consist of her double headed scythe that is able to help her control her plants as well. Not only that but her linage also saves her as well. The user is also at times able to combine her haki into her attacks as well.
Skill Strengths:
-The user is able to control her plants with her weapon Will there be a corresponding weapon for this? Orrr...
-The user is able to cut the ground, if there is grass she can used it like razor leafs. I'm going to need a bit of an explanation on this... Specifically what you mean by "cut the ground".
-The user is able to control her devil fruit powers and attack with her weapon as well.
-The user is able to transfer her Haki in her weapon.
Skill Weaknesses:
-Extremely big weapon so allies can get hurt in the cross fire,
-Weak against Fire based Elements
-Weak in Snowy Weather
-Cannot do Long Range Attacks.



Tier 1 Technique Name: Lilly's Petals
Tier 1 Technique Type: Feild
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 4 Posts Can be a three post cooldown.
Tier 1 Technique Description:
The user is able to blind her enemy by blooming flower petals on the handle of Hime. The Flower petals then fall off and cover the enemies vision. Doing this gives her the advantage against someone. The Flower petals are able to cover to cover a 5 meter distance, and enemies and allies who are in this 5 meter distance can be blinded as well.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
-Killua is not effected because she is blind.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
-Allies can also be blind as well as enemies.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Tigerlilly's Roar
Tier 1 Technique Type: Melee
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 5 Posts 2 posts is fine.
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Turning 360 degrees, and slicing the ground as well. The user is able to send the plants around her up from the ground and towards the enemy like a wave. It has a 5 meter radius around her. Allies will be unharmed.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
-The user actually has the ability to control the plant life and move around allies
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
-If there is no grass or anything plant related underneath the user, then it cannot be used. This skill works in tandem with your other skill, which can produce its own plants under most circumstances. Please have another weakness listed.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Juniper's Leap
Tier 1 Technique Type: Melee
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 2
Tier 1 Technique Description:
The user jumps into the hair and does flips in the air until she almost resembles a wheel. Going down on the enemy. When going down. She leaves a crater almost and keeps spinning for about 2 meters. The attack gives her more *movementum and speed. She uses her keen scope to know where her target is. Let it be noted that this technique would be subject to the post-limitations of kenbonshoku as well. On another note, I'm confused as to how this is a technique unique to this skill. As far as I can tell, it's just a move where the user jumps into the air and comes back down in a wheel-like motion similar to Sonic the Hedgehog. If you could elaborate and make this description clearer, that would be helpful.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
Killa is able to control where she goes.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
Can hurt an *allie

Tier 1 Technique Name: Pansy's Sheild
Tier 1 Technique Type:  Support//Defensive
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 4 Posts 3 posts is fine.
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Almost like a barrier, the user spins the double handed scythe in front of her. Blocking anything that is thrown at her. She is able to block bullets, daggers, as well as some elements. She does this with Keen Scope as well.  She is also able to protect people as well. Just like the previous one, having a technique that is dependent on Kenbonshoku also makes its use limited to the restrictions of Kenbonshoku. Also note that this technique will not be able to block anything that is thrown at her.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
Able to create almost a shield like all around her body.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
Cannot user her abilities when using this one.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Bramble's Claws
Tier 1 Technique Type: Melee
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 5 Posts 3 posts is fine to balance out combat against logia-users.
Tier 1 Technique Description:
The Double Handed scythes are harden with haki. Where the user is able to use against Logia users as well as regular users.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
-lasts for about 3 posts
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
-cannot use her devil fruit when holding the haki covered double scythe.

Fix the necessary and I'll give you your first approval.


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