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1 Doku Doku no Mi on Sun Feb 08, 2015 12:18 pm

Skill Name: Doku Doku no Mi (Venom Venom Fruit)
Skill Type: Fruit
Skill Information: The Doku Doku no mi is a paramecia type devil fruit that allows the user to create and manipulate a big amount of poison. He creates the poison from the body, and can be very harmful just by touching it. It has poisonous properties, meaning you get poisoned when you touch it, but it also has acid properties, it can burn and pass through solid objects such as rock and other non-organic material as well as through any organic material. The poisons can easily be cured by any doctor if they are only poisoned by one of the different poisons, but if they get poisoned by more than one, things can get complicated even for a doctor.
Skill Strengths:

  • Poison Attacks: Since all the attacks of this fruit technically poison the enemy, each attack will cause poisoning which will deal constant damage to the enemy plus extra effects if the attack has any. If the enemy is only poisoned by one attack, they can be cured by a doctor, but if they are poisoned by two or more attacks, the cure will be complicated to find, and they will only be cured at the end of the thread. The poison causes constant damage and pain all over the body.
  • Poison Immunity: His fruit grants him the complete immunity of poison. He isn't affected by any poison/venom based attack or any type of poison in existence. If he its the poison though, he will get diarrhea and he won't be able to fight for a whole day.
  • Flaming Venom: The venom has a flaming aspect, it can be burned without damaging much the poison. If the poison is burned, it just turns gas. This can be used to perform flaming attacks.

Skill Weaknesses:

  • Easy Cure: As already mentioned, the poison is actually easily cured by a doctor, alchemists, etc. They can cure it in the middle of a fight quickly and without doing much thing. (No need to use any ability)
  • Water and Sea Stone: As any devil fruit, the user loses all power when he is touched by sea stone or water. He will lose his devil fruit abilities and won't be as strong as he usually is.
  • Haki: Haki is completely immune to the poison. The poison will never be able to trespass it. It won't trespass sea stone either.


Tier 1:
Tier 1 Technique Name: Surasshu (Slash)
Tier 1 Technique Type: Mid Range
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 2 posts
Tier 1 Technique Description: The user imitates a slash with his hand. This creates a 2 meter high poison slash which travels at the enemy and burns through any organic material or rock.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
-The slash is powerful enough to even pass through rock.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
-Even if the user is slashed by the attack, it will pass through them, but won't cut them in half.
-The slash is thin, making it easily evaded somehow.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Gasubonbe (Gas Bomb)
Tier 1 Technique Type: Mid Range/Area Attack Radius (Travels)
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 3 posts
Tier 1 Technique Description: The user makes a gum-like bubble and then shoots it at the enemy at the same speed than a cannonball. When it crashes, it creates a poison gas explosion. The poison gas has the same properties than the normal venom, but it paralyzes any enemy same tier than the user or lower for 1 post.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
-Can attack many.
-Paralyzes 1 post.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
-The ball is easily evaded.
-The gas will only last 2 posts.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Beruto (Belt)
Tier 1 Technique Type: Close Range
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 2 posts
Tier 1 Technique Description: It's quite a simple attack. The user covers his arm in venom and then strikes the enemy with it, usually aiming to the stomach.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
-Simple attack, easy to hit since it moves with the user.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
-If the enemy moves and the attack fails, it will automatically end the attack.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Kushi (Skewer)
Tier 1 Technique Type: Mid Range
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 2 posts
Tier 1 Technique Description: The user creates from his body some poison. He moves it like a whip, but instead of attacking like one, it's used like a spear to pierce the enemy.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
-Can pierce many enemies as long as the range isn't passed.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
-The whip can only travel straight.

Tier 1 Technique Name: Ken
Tier 1 Technique Type: Close Range
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 3 posts
Tier 1 Technique Description: The user creates a 90 centimeter high poison fist in his human fist. He then punches the enemy our launches the fist at the enemy.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
-The user can punch the enemy or launch the fist. He has two possibilities.
-The poison of the fist is acid enough to melt anything it touches to pass through anything until it gets to it's maximum range.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
-If it's shot, the fist won't get more range than the maximum of close range.
-If it's no launched, the fist will disappear intermediately after it attempts to hit, even if it fails.



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2 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Sun Feb 08, 2015 7:32 pm

I'm not so sure about the poison also acting like a acid. I know in some instances it can be potent enough to burn like acid but I'd be comfortable with that being a higher tier skill then a passive. Let me see what other staff think.



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3 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Sun Feb 08, 2015 8:16 pm

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Poison Attacks 'Strength' - Just keep in mind that doctor could treat multiple poisons/vemons. (And others player with Medical Field Occupations).

San Yoroi (Acid Armor) - Yeah make that a skill with a duration and cooldown for high tier.


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4 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Mon Feb 09, 2015 6:20 pm

Done, changed the armor

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5 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Tue Feb 10, 2015 8:40 am

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1/2 Approval. 2nd staff member needed for approval and/or to catch something I may have miss.


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6 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Tue Feb 10, 2015 11:16 am

I'm still not okay with the poison straight up having an acid effect as well. Not as a passive.


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7 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Tue Feb 10, 2015 2:21 pm

So, just to let things clear, want me to change the perfect venom passive?

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8 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Tue Feb 10, 2015 2:50 pm

It is too strong as it is and would need a tech for this to work so please remove that as a strength and pick something else.

I would also like to bring up the fire weakness. Technically you could turn this into a strength and create a poisonous flame thrower as well, unless the fire actually destroys the poison in the process.

The other thing is this. Alchemists can potentially find a counter to your poison depending on the type of poison. Essentially, if they can get a sample from you some how, and research it, or have a skill/equipment that allows them to analyze it, they MAY be able to come up with something that can weaken the effects, or even cure the effects. If they have the proper knowledge and have the ingredients on hand or an item that gives them access to prepared ingredients, then they could potentially effect it mid fight.

I just wanted you to know just in case you encountered one.


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9 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Thu Feb 12, 2015 6:48 pm

Changed things, and liked the idea actually.

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10 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Thu Feb 12, 2015 9:24 pm

Alchemists and doctors would be a given weakness. You need other weaknesses that really effect you other than that. Once you've figured that out I'll go over everything else. I like the changes btw.


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11 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Sun Feb 22, 2015 9:06 am

Bump?
Sorry for the lateness, completely forgot

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12 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Sun Feb 22, 2015 1:22 pm

Alright, the easy cure will not work. No one is gonna be able to cure poison mid fight unless they have an ability to do so or have had time to research your poison :P. Otherwise that's a weak poison. On top of that everyone has Haki so if they know what you do then yeah, it could be blocked.

Try to find a couple more replacement weaknesses please. I'm just trying to look at for you at this point.


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13 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Mon Apr 06, 2015 1:53 pm


Sogeki has expressed the desire to completely restart on this account--save for Haki Lineage, of course. That in mind, I am archiving this topic for his restart.


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14 Re: Doku Doku no Mi on Thu Apr 16, 2015 12:50 pm


Unarchived at Sogeki's request.


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