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1 Levi Storm on Thu Feb 05, 2015 2:59 am

Name: Levi (Leviathan) Storm
Epithet: "Monster Shot"
Age: 27
Gender: M
Race: Human
Sexuality: Straight (Heterosexual)

Affiliation: Neutral (Does not matter where he goes, as long as he fufills his dreams)
Occupation: Gourmet Chef/Sniper


Appearance: Some consider Levi as quite attractive, but no one can really figure out how. Whether, it's cute, devilish, handsome, charismatic. He has light brown hair and red eyes topped with a fit slender figure. He tends to dress very neatly and formally, often seen wearing a black, long button-up with jeans or a suit.
Hair Color: Light Brown
Eye Color: Red
Skin Tone: Light
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 150 lbs
Tattoo: No tattoos for now

Personality:
Seeming to be silent but caring, Levi likes to act more than talking with it comes to situations. He also keeps thoughts and expressions to himself. The only people who have ever seen him show any feelings are the ones he trusts the most. He even keeps his silence in battle, making opponents confused of whether he’s really taking the fight seriously or not. He also likes to make friends and tries to not lose them. He has no fear in anyone or any creature; however, he fears more abstract things like regret, pride, greed, guilt, etc. Because of his fearlessness, he’ll almost always go up to people he just met and introduce himself in a friendly matter. Levi does not know what love is, but believes he will find the one he most loves through fate or if their personalities match. Also, anyone who purposely tries to get in the way of Levi’s relations with another friend of his (especially the one he loves) will end up being on Levi’s bad side. There are people who also find Levi attractive but do not know whether if it is his looks, charm, personality, talent, etc. Therefore, Levi does not really believe that they are saying the truth and just thinks they’re giving compliments. Levi also comically gets extremely depressed after someone makes fun of his sniping or cooking skills and will sometimes hide himself in a box or corner. This is in fact, the only time Levi will show deep emotion.

Likes:
Ice Cream: The one thing he can't make. He loves ice cream to be even be called his favorite food but doesn't really like to admit it.
The Cold: He likes the cold because of the chilly air and feeling of being warm after a cold day. He also likes snow, winter, ice, very cold drinks, the refrigerator, and ice cream.
Reading: Levi likes the silence in reading and imagining how it would be if it were real life.
Cooking: Levi cooks as a hobby and believes that a woman should never cook for others unless it is her ambition to cook.
Bubble Gum: Levi likes to chew on something while waiting or when he's bored in general. He finds bubble gum almost like a childhood memory and likes to chew on it alot. He also never spits it out unless he can dispose of it in the trash.
Fireworks: Levi will never touch a firework because he thinks it is magical. He also won't believe anyone who tries to explain.
Firearms & Explosions: Not only does he uses them in combat, he finds the sight of someone wielding a firearm and/or watching something or someone explode, very exciting and fun to watch.
Wine or Cola: Levi's favorite drink is wine. However, Levi also likes Cola almost just as much.

Dislikes:
-Sun: From the horrible heat to the unhealthy sunburns, Levi prefers a nice, dark cool area.
-Too much heat: Levi dislikes the sun and hates the heat twice as much. Too much sweating occurs and he'll take everything except his shorts off. Ironically he likes fire, being warm, and warm drinks.
-Anti-Firearm Beings: Levi hates people trying to take away his weapons. She believes its his freedom to hold any weapon he wants without anyone forbiding him. Especially the government.

Motivations:
Greatest Sniper: He wants to be the greatest sniper there ever was.
True Love: Levi aims to have someone to protect from this dangerous world

Fears:
-World without any weapons
-Losing respect from his friends
-Being alone due to his lineage
-His lineage taking over at the worst time
-Having his true love die before him

Inner Lineage: Blood Rage: Leviathan
*Only activated when in extreme stress or when near death.*
Duration: 3 posts (Tier 1)/ Cooldown: once per thread
Description: The Lineage of the Storm Family and their descendants have been almost cursed with this lineage to have a sudden switch of personality relating to their "monster". Usual the personality is just destructive, full of hate, and blind of rage. Due to the Marines and Pirates alike knowing about this dangerous lineage, they will despise, abuse, or just encourage the member. These members must be born with their first name being the monster's name. For if their name is not kept for 20 years, they will die of a heart attack. Some give his/her self a nick name, while others will even change their whole name later to avoid their publicity. There are some extreme cases of those who have committed suicide.
Ability: Almost similar to Monster Chopper. Depending on the tier, Levi's lineage is activated for a certain amount of time. Levi's tier power also increase by one and due to being the "Leviathan", his tier power increase by one with no water resistance against him (both capped at T6). Levi can also breathe underwater and on land during the whole time. However, Levi searches to defeat and in some cases kill everyone. (Kills same tier or lower NPCs on sight and players if allowed to). Due to this, Levi is known to kill everyone and destroy everything on sight through brute force. At the end of the duration, Levi is knocked out for 10 posts or until the end of the thread.
Under all of this, "Monster Shot" Levi shoots his way into the scene!!



Last edited by LeviStorm on Sun Feb 08, 2015 11:10 pm; edited 2 times in total

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2 Re: Levi Storm on Fri Feb 06, 2015 2:00 am

Bumping Shot!!

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3 Re: Levi Storm on Fri Feb 06, 2015 9:10 am

Everything looks good to me. I don't know how others will feel about the Lineage, but I support ya on it. BUT, only being powered up by one tier, not two.


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4 Re: Levi Storm on Sat Feb 07, 2015 12:34 am

what if Levi just has no resistance against the water with a tier raise??

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5 Re: Levi Storm on Sat Feb 07, 2015 10:28 am

because his lineage is supposed to make him compared to the power of the monster
(here it's the leviathan)

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6 Re: Levi Storm on Sat Feb 07, 2015 5:16 pm

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Inner Lineage: Blood Rage: Leviathan
*Only activated when in extreme stress or when near death.*
Duration: 3 posts (Tier 1)/ Cooldown: 7 threads
Description: The Lineage of the Storm Family and their descendants have been almost cursed with this lineage to have a sudden switch of personality relating to their "monster". Usual the personality is just destructive, full of hate, and blind of rage. Due to the Marines and Pirates alike knowing about this dangerous lineage, they will despise, abuse, or just encourage the member. These members must be born with their first name being the monster's name. For if their name is not kept for 20 years, they will die of a heart attack. Some give his/her self a nick name, while others will even change their whole name later to avoid their publicity. There are some extreme cases of those who have committed suicide.
Ability: Almost similar to Monster Chopper. Depending on the tier, Levi's lineage is activated for a certain amount of time. Levi's tier power also increase by one and due to being the "Leviathan", his tier power increase by one with no water resistance against him (both capped at T6). Levi can also breathe underwater and on land during the whole time. However, Levi searches to defeat and in some cases kill everyone. (Kills same tier or lower NPCs on sight and players if allowed to). Due to this, Levi is known to kill everyone and destroy everything on sight through brute force. At the end of the duration, Levi is knocked out for 10 posts or until the end of the thread.

-Like Ryan said. Just on Tier increase. Though you already made that change

- For Duration and Cooldown. After you ability your character is knockout for rest of the thread, yes? . The Cooldown should really be Once Per Thread. Also for the duration does it increase as it Tier up? I notice the 3 posts (Tier 1) Next to it. If it does increase, please state by how much.

-The part highlighted in red. Just be to clear, your character just goes into a state of mind when he sees everything as a threat and tries to defeat/kill them, right?


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7 Re: Levi Storm on Sun Feb 08, 2015 7:23 pm

What do you mean by no water resistance? Also if you actually had a fruit you would lose anything water related. Just an fyi if you did intend to do so.


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8 Re: Levi Storm on Sun Feb 08, 2015 10:35 pm

-no fruit just a lineage, its liek a fishman being unaffected by water

-The Cooldown should really be Once Per Thread (I'll change that)
-Also for the duration does it increase as it Tier up? I notice the 3 posts (Tier 1) (yes)
-If it does increase, i havent decided but prob 2~3 post per thread

-The part highlighted in red. Yes, will harm anyone in sight

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9 Re: Levi Storm on Sun Feb 08, 2015 11:55 pm

You wont be able to kill pc characters or important npc characters with your lineage btw.


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10 Re: Levi Storm on Mon Feb 09, 2015 12:06 am

yes unless given permission im aware

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11 Re: Levi Storm on Mon Feb 09, 2015 12:16 am

Approval 1/2


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12 Re: Levi Storm on Tue Feb 10, 2015 8:54 am

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2nd Approval. Sorry for the wait.

LeviStorm wrote:Name: Levi (Leviathan) Storm
Epithet: "Monster Shot"
Age: 27
Gender: M
Race: Human
Sexuality: Straight (Heterosexual)

Affiliation: Neutral (Does not matter where he goes, as long as he fufills his dreams)
Occupation: Gourmet Chef/Sniper


Appearance: Some consider Levi as quite attractive, but no one can really figure out how. Whether, it's cute, devilish, handsome, charismatic. He has light brown hair and red eyes topped with a fit slender figure. He tends to dress very neatly and formally, often seen wearing a black, long button-up with jeans or a suit.
Hair Color: Light Brown
Eye Color: Red
Skin Tone: Light
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 150 lbs
Tattoo: No tattoos for now

Personality:
Seeming to be silent but caring, Levi likes to act more than talking with it comes to situations. He also keeps thoughts and expressions to himself. The only people who have ever seen him show any feelings are the ones he trusts the most. He even keeps his silence in battle, making opponents confused of whether he’s really taking the fight seriously or not. He also likes to make friends and tries to not lose them. He has no fear in anyone or any creature; however, he fears more abstract things like regret, pride, greed, guilt, etc. Because of his fearlessness, he’ll almost always go up to people he just met and introduce himself in a friendly matter. Levi does not know what love is, but believes he will find the one he most loves through fate or if their personalities match. Also, anyone who purposely tries to get in the way of Levi’s relations with another friend of his (especially the one he loves) will end up being on Levi’s bad side. There are people who also find Levi attractive but do not know whether if it is his looks, charm, personality, talent, etc. Therefore, Levi does not really believe that they are saying the truth and just thinks they’re giving compliments. Levi also comically gets extremely depressed after someone makes fun of his sniping or cooking skills and will sometimes hide himself in a box or corner. This is in fact, the only time Levi will show deep emotion.

Likes:
Ice Cream: The one thing he can't make. He loves ice cream to be even be called his favorite food but doesn't really like to admit it.
The Cold: He likes the cold because of the chilly air and feeling of being warm after a cold day. He also likes snow, winter, ice, very cold drinks, the refrigerator, and ice cream.
Reading: Levi likes the silence in reading and imagining how it would be if it were real life.
Cooking: Levi cooks as a hobby and believes that a woman should never cook for others unless it is her ambition to cook.
Bubble Gum: Levi likes to chew on something while waiting or when he's bored in general. He finds bubble gum almost like a childhood memory and likes to chew on it alot. He also never spits it out unless he can dispose of it in the trash.
Fireworks: Levi will never touch a firework because he thinks it is magical. He also won't believe anyone who tries to explain.
Firearms & Explosions: Not only does he uses them in combat, he finds the sight of someone wielding a firearm and/or watching something or someone explode, very exciting and fun to watch.
Wine or Cola: Levi's favorite drink is wine. However, Levi also likes Cola almost just as much.

Dislikes:
-Sun: From the horrible heat to the unhealthy sunburns, Levi prefers a nice, dark cool area.
-Too much heat: Levi dislikes the sun and hates the heat twice as much. Too much sweating occurs and he'll take everything except his shorts off. Ironically he likes fire, being warm, and warm drinks.
-Anti-Firearm Beings: Levi hates people trying to take away his weapons. She believes its his freedom to hold any weapon he wants without anyone forbiding him. Especially the government.

Motivations:
Greatest Sniper: He wants to be the greatest sniper there ever was.
True Love: Levi aims to have someone to protect from this dangerous world

Fears:
-World without any weapons
-Losing respect from his friends
-Being alone due to his lineage
-His lineage taking over at the worst time
-Having his true love die before him

Inner Lineage: Blood Rage: Leviathan
*Only activated when in extreme stress or when near death.*
Duration: 3 posts (Tier 1)/ Cooldown: once per thread
Description: The Lineage of the Storm Family and their descendants have been almost cursed with this lineage to have a sudden switch of personality relating to their "monster". Usual the personality is just destructive, full of hate, and blind of rage. Due to the Marines and Pirates alike knowing about this dangerous lineage, they will despise, abuse, or just encourage the member. These members must be born with their first name being the monster's name. For if their name is not kept for 20 years, they will die of a heart attack. Some give his/her self a nick name, while others will even change their whole name later to avoid their publicity. There are some extreme cases of those who have committed suicide.
Ability: Almost similar to Monster Chopper. Depending on the tier, Levi's lineage is activated for a certain amount of time. Levi's tier power also increase by one and due to being the "Leviathan", his tier power increase by one with no water resistance against him (both capped at T6). Levi can also breathe underwater and on land during the whole time. However, Levi searches to defeat and in some cases kill everyone. (Kills same tier or lower NPCs on sight and players if allowed to). Due to this, Levi is known to kill everyone and destroy everything on sight through brute force. At the end of the duration, Levi is knocked out for 10 posts or until the end of the thread.
Under all of this, "Monster Shot" Levi shoots his way into the scene!!

Wulfric Von'Funk wrote:Approval 1/2


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