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1 Chiheisen no bureido on Sun Feb 01, 2015 11:09 pm

Equipment Name: Chiheisen no bureido
Tier: 1
Type: Weapon
Equipment Significance: is used in tandem with a shield for melee combat purposes.
Description:
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it weighs 57lbs and is 1.30 meters in length from pommel to tip of blade

Strengths:
-high resistance to cold and heat
-high resistance to rust and wind damage
-stays sharp twice as long as a normal blade of the same quality


Weaknesses:
-will break when parrying a weapon 2 tiers higher and from weapons of 1 tier higher
-highly susceptible to ice of any kind (will break after 2 tier 1 ice attacks)
-will break when more than 0.7 tons is applied at any one time



Last edited by Bloodypolarbear on Wed Feb 04, 2015 7:30 pm; edited 2 times in total


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2 Re: Chiheisen no bureido on Sun Feb 01, 2015 11:20 pm

Well, for one thing, it's a T1 weapon. It wouldn't have COMPLETE resistance to rust and wind damage. And it would be susceptible to higher amounts of damage from a weapon 1 tier higher. Other than a those few changes, it looks good.


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3 Re: Chiheisen no bureido on Mon Feb 02, 2015 5:06 pm

bump


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4 Re: Chiheisen no bureido on Tue Feb 03, 2015 12:07 am

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-Are you sure you want your sword to weigh 57lbs?

-1st & 2nd Strengths. hmm. I see how another staff member feels about those.


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5 Re: Chiheisen no bureido on Tue Feb 03, 2015 9:23 pm

I'm sure it gives weight to the swing and power


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6 Re: Chiheisen no bureido on Wed Feb 04, 2015 1:50 pm

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Alright. I give me 1/2 Approval. 2nd Staff member for approval or to catch something I may have miss.


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7 Re: Chiheisen no bureido on Wed Feb 04, 2015 3:43 pm

For the strengths you have, a lava and a wrist damage weakness are not really good counters. Wrist damage is something that can potentially never happen and lava is very very rare. Your strengths are very good, I'd like you to find a couple better weaknesses please.


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8 Re: Chiheisen no bureido on Wed Feb 04, 2015 7:31 pm

bump this is all I could think of


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9 Re: Chiheisen no bureido on Wed Feb 04, 2015 7:32 pm

Looks fine to me.


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10 Re: Chiheisen no bureido on Thu Feb 05, 2015 7:55 pm

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Approval.

Bloodypolarbear wrote:Equipment Name: Chiheisen no bureido
Tier: 1
Type: Weapon
Equipment Significance: is used in tandem with a shield for melee combat purposes.
Description:
Spoiler:
it weighs 57lbs and is 1.30 meters in length from pommel to tip of blade

Strengths:
-high resistance to cold and heat
-high resistance to rust and wind damage
-stays sharp twice as long as a normal blade of the same quality


Weaknesses:
-will break when parrying a weapon 2 tiers higher and from weapons of 1 tier higher
-highly susceptible to ice of any kind (will break after 2 tier 1 ice attacks)
-will break when more than 0.7 tons is applied at any one time

Ryandurbur wrote:Looks fine to me.


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