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1 StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu on Mon Jan 26, 2015 12:38 pm

Skill Name: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu
Skill Type: Martial Arts..?
Skill Information:
StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu is deadly style of fighting invented by Miles Melody. This style of fighting requires great concentration and accuracy to pull off. One must enter into a state of mind which is as peaceful as a gentle waterfall. Once these requirements have been met, only then will the fighter be able to use the techniques from this blessed fighting style.

Just kidding, they're simply random techniques made up my Miles on the spot.
Skill Strengths:
+ Quick movements
+ Not something very predictable
+ Fun to use
Skill Weaknesses:
- Can easily be countered by experienced fighters
- Not very creative when it comes to names
- You'll probably lose a lot of guitars meaning you'll probably lose a lot of money


Tier 1:
Tier 1 Technique Name: Jewel Smasher
Tier 1 Technique Type: Offensive
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 1 post
Tier 1 Technique Description:
A real show stopper. This technique can only be used on males. Miles sends a quick kick to the man's tender bits, often called the family jewels hence the super creative name.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
+ If it hits, it can cause quite some pain to male.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- Can easily be countered
- You'll look like an absolute dick afterwards

Tier 1 Technique Name: Lemon Squish
Tier 1 Technique Type: Offensive
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 1 post
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Miles pokes the enemy's eyes quickly with his fingers in order to temporarily blind them
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
+ Effective way to escape
+ Quick and easy to preform
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- Again, it's easy to dodge
- If the opponent is wearing glasses, it won't work

Tier 1 Technique Name: Thor's Hammer
Tier 1 Technique Type: Offensive
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 2 posts
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Miles grabs his guitar and aims to slam it onto the head of his opponent in order to cause some damaged.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
+ You actually get to use a weapon
+ Since you're using a weapon, it causes much more damaged than when you're using fists and kicks
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- You'll maybe lose a guitar
- You're wide open when preforming this attack, so you'll have to attack quickly.

Tier 1 Technique Name: The Look Away
Tier 1 Technique Type: Defensive?
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 2 posts
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Miles acts surprised and looks away from his opponent in hopes that the opponent will also look that same direction in order to see why Miles is acting that way. If that happens, Miles runs for it.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
+ Provides an easy escape route
+ Makes the other person look like an idiot
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- You'll be the idiot if this technique fails
- If you suck at acting, you'll most likely fail

Tier 1 Technique Name: Excuse me, your zipper is undone
Tier 1 Technique Type: Defensive
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 1 post
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Miles gets his guitar out in front of him ready to block any possible attacks or maybe even counter.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
+ The technique name will probably make the opponent look to his zipper giving you an opening for a counter attack
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- You'll probably lose another guitar



Last edited by Creative? on Tue Jan 27, 2015 10:45 am; edited 1 time in total

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2 Re: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu on Mon Jan 26, 2015 10:37 pm

I personally see no problems here. 1/2 approval. Just need 1 more bud!


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3 Re: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu on Mon Jan 26, 2015 11:01 pm

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StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu: Skill Strength + Skill Weakness: Balance those out.
-My suggestion is just to combine 1st and 2nd Strengths and delete the 3rd strength (Not really a strength in my opinion). For your weaknesses just delete the 2nd Weakness (Not really a weakness in my opinion).

-Thor's Hammer: Add another weakness or just combine the two strengths into one.
-The Look Away: 2nd Strength really isn't a strength. Just delete that
-Excuse me, your zipper is undone: -1st Weaknesses isn't a weakness really. Just delete that


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4 Re: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu on Tue Jan 27, 2015 10:46 am

Balanced out the strength and weaknesses.

As for the Look Away strength, I really wanna keep that one. However if I absolutely have to delete it then I'll do so.

Thanks for the suggestions.


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5 Re: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu on Tue Jan 27, 2015 9:26 pm

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Wulfric Von'Funk wrote:I personally see no problems here. 1/2 approval. Just need 1 more bud!

Alright. 2nd Approval




Skill Name: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu
Skill Type: Martial Arts..?
Skill Information:
StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu is deadly style of fighting invented by Miles Melody. This style of fighting requires great concentration and accuracy to pull off. One must enter into a state of mind which is as peaceful as a gentle waterfall. Once these requirements have been met, only then will the fighter be able to use the techniques from this blessed fighting style.

Just kidding, they're simply random techniques made up my Miles on the spot.
Skill Strengths:
+ Quick movements
+ Not something very predictable
+ Fun to use
Skill Weaknesses:
- Can easily be countered by experienced fighters
- Not very creative when it comes to names
- You'll probably lose a lot of guitars meaning you'll probably lose a lot of money


Tier 1:
Tier 1 Technique Name: Jewel Smasher
Tier 1 Technique Type: Offensive
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 1 post
Tier 1 Technique Description:
A real show stopper. This technique can only be used on males. Miles sends a quick kick to the man's tender bits, often called the family jewels hence the super creative name.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
+ If it hits, it can cause quite some pain to male.
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- Can easily be countered
- You'll look like an absolute dick afterwards

Tier 1 Technique Name: Lemon Squish
Tier 1 Technique Type: Offensive
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 1 post
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Miles pokes the enemy's eyes quickly with his fingers in order to temporarily blind them
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
+ Effective way to escape
+ Quick and easy to preform
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- Again, it's easy to dodge
- If the opponent is wearing glasses, it won't work

Tier 1 Technique Name: Thor's Hammer
Tier 1 Technique Type: Offensive
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 2 posts
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Miles grabs his guitar and aims to slam it onto the head of his opponent in order to cause some damaged.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
+ You actually get to use a weapon
+ Since you're using a weapon, it causes much more damaged than when you're using fists and kicks
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- You'll maybe lose a guitar
- You're wide open when preforming this attack, so you'll have to attack quickly.

Tier 1 Technique Name: The Look Away
Tier 1 Technique Type: Defensive?
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 2 posts
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Miles acts surprised and looks away from his opponent in hopes that the opponent will also look that same direction in order to see why Miles is acting that way. If that happens, Miles runs for it.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
+ Provides an easy escape route
+ Makes the other person look like an idiot
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- You'll be the idiot if this technique fails
- If you suck at acting, you'll most likely fail

Tier 1 Technique Name: Excuse me, your zipper is undone
Tier 1 Technique Type: Defensive
Tier 1 Technique Cooldown: 1 post
Tier 1 Technique Description:
Miles gets his guitar out in front of him ready to block any possible attacks or maybe even counter.
Tier 1 Technique Strengths:
+ The technique name will probably make the opponent look to his zipper giving you an opening for a counter attack
Tier 1 Technique Weaknesses:
- You'll probably lose another guitar


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