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1StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu Empty StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu Mon Jan 26, 2015 12:38 pm

Melody

Melody

Skill Name: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu
Skill Type: Martial Arts..?
Skill Information:
StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu is deadly style of fighting invented by Miles Melody. This style of fighting requires great concentration and accuracy to pull off. One must enter into a state of mind which is as peaceful as a gentle waterfall. Once these requirements have been met, only then will the fighter be able to use the techniques from this blessed fighting style.

Just kidding, they're simply random techniques made up my Miles on the spot.
Skill Strengths:
+ Quick movements
+ Not something very predictable
+ Fun to use
Skill Weaknesses:
- Can easily be countered by experienced fighters
- Not very creative when it comes to names
- You'll probably lose a lot of guitars meaning you'll probably lose a lot of money


Tier 1:



Last edited by Creative? on Tue Jan 27, 2015 10:45 am; edited 1 time in total

2StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu Empty Re: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu Mon Jan 26, 2015 10:37 pm

Wulfric Von'Funk

Wulfric Von'Funk

I personally see no problems here. 1/2 approval. Just need 1 more bud!

3StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu Empty Re: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu Mon Jan 26, 2015 11:01 pm

Kalliope

Kalliope
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Founder

StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu: Skill Strength + Skill Weakness: Balance those out.
-My suggestion is just to combine 1st and 2nd Strengths and delete the 3rd strength (Not really a strength in my opinion). For your weaknesses just delete the 2nd Weakness (Not really a weakness in my opinion).

-Thor's Hammer: Add another weakness or just combine the two strengths into one.
-The Look Away: 2nd Strength really isn't a strength. Just delete that
-Excuse me, your zipper is undone: -1st Weaknesses isn't a weakness really. Just delete that

4StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu Empty Re: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu Tue Jan 27, 2015 10:46 am

Melody

Melody

Balanced out the strength and weaknesses.

As for the Look Away strength, I really wanna keep that one. However if I absolutely have to delete it then I'll do so.

Thanks for the suggestions.

5StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu Empty Re: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu Tue Jan 27, 2015 9:26 pm

Kalliope

Kalliope
Founder
Founder

Wulfric Von'Funk wrote:I personally see no problems here. 1/2 approval. Just need 1 more bud!

Alright. 2nd Approval




Skill Name: StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu
Skill Type: Martial Arts..?
Skill Information:
StayawayorI'llhurtyou-jutsu is deadly style of fighting invented by Miles Melody. This style of fighting requires great concentration and accuracy to pull off. One must enter into a state of mind which is as peaceful as a gentle waterfall. Once these requirements have been met, only then will the fighter be able to use the techniques from this blessed fighting style.

Just kidding, they're simply random techniques made up my Miles on the spot.
Skill Strengths:
+ Quick movements
+ Not something very predictable
+ Fun to use
Skill Weaknesses:
- Can easily be countered by experienced fighters
- Not very creative when it comes to names
- You'll probably lose a lot of guitars meaning you'll probably lose a lot of money


Tier 1:

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