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1 Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu on Mon Dec 22, 2014 9:15 pm

Equipment Name: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu
Tier: 4
Type: Weapon
Equipment Significance: Eregansu is one of the 3 reincarnations that Kauzu uses (The three reincarnations are weapons made to kill, powerful weapons that can be very dangerous when used by evil hands), this one was the first second he used, and he loves it because it's the perfect weapon to battle with elegance.
Description: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu it's a long trident with very interesting mechanism. As the other reincarnations, Eregansu's ability can only be used by activating it with gas. The weapon's material, it's an special material that can be stretched immensely.
After placing gas in it by a very small compartment that has at the beginning of the stick, the user presses a button next to the compartment that creates fire, exploding the weapon from the inside. But the weapon can't be broken from the inside, so the stick instead of breaking, it expands straight at the speed of a bullet. The explosion then ends and returns to it's normal size.
The weapon can expand a total of 5 meters straight, and in it's normal size, it reaches a length of 2.30 meters long.
Trident:


Strengths:
-The trident has a very rare mechanism, giving the user an ability that not any weapon posses, the ability to extend with out any devil fruit.

Weaknesses:
-While being stretched, the weapon loses endurance, meaning that it can be easily broken by same tier weapons, and sometimes tier 3 weapons too.



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2 Re: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu on Tue Dec 23, 2014 12:14 pm

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For your strength, just keep in mind. That not depending on weapon/equipment it wouldn't break instantly if that what your implying.


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3 Re: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu on Sat Jan 24, 2015 3:57 pm

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Approved, Unless other staff member disagrees.

Kauzu Hatake wrote:
Equipment Name: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu
Tier: 4
Type: Weapon
Equipment Significance: Eregansu is one of the 3 reincarnations that Kauzu uses (The three reincarnations are weapons made to kill, powerful weapons that can be very dangerous when used by evil hands), this one was the first second he used, and he loves it because it's the perfect weapon to battle with elegance.
Description: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu it's a long trident with very interesting mechanism. As the other reincarnations, Eregansu's ability can only be used by activating it with gas. The weapon's material, it's an special material that can be stretched immensely.
After placing gas in it by a very small compartment that has at the beginning of the stick, the user presses a button next to the compartment that creates fire, exploding the weapon from the inside. But the weapon can't be broken from the inside, so the stick instead of breaking, it expands straight at the speed of a bullet. The explosion then ends and returns to it's normal size.
The weapon can expand a total of 50 meters straight, and in it's normal size, it reaches a length of 2.30 meters long.
Trident:


Strengths:
-The trident has a very rare mechanism, that gives the user other abilities with it.

Weaknesses:
-While being stretched, the weapon loses endurance, meaning that it can be easily broken by same tier weapons, and sometimes tier 3 weapons too.


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4 Re: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu on Sat Jan 24, 2015 4:07 pm

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What abilities does this give?

Also, your equipment will not be able to extend out to 50 Meters. I'll give you 5 meters extension as a compromise.

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5 Re: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu on Sat Jan 24, 2015 6:48 pm

Changed it to 5 meters ^^But I don't understand your question...


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6 Re: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu on Sat Jan 24, 2015 7:02 pm

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-The trident has a very rare mechanism, that gives the user other abilities with it.

That ^ You are supposed to state all abilities in the strengths. I saw them above afterwards, because I saw the strengths were vague and that's why it originally was brought out of approval. Please make the according strengths and weaknesses.


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7 Re: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu on Sat Jan 24, 2015 7:05 pm

Hmmm it is kinda vague, I anyway changed it, not sure if it's better or not


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8 Re: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu on Sat Jan 24, 2015 7:16 pm

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Make sure to include anything that may pertain to its strengths and weaknesses, so if you add a strength you must add a weakness.


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9 Re: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu on Sat Jan 24, 2015 7:41 pm

Okay, I will thanks ^^But... Do I need to edit anything else?


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10 Re: Shi no umarekawari, Eregansu on Sat Jan 24, 2015 7:54 pm

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Actually it's fine, donezo Approved


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